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thanks for the review ! unfortunately , the mc is not really "evil" for now as he still needs to grow. As for the chapters , i'm quite busy at the moment but i should have more time soon , at first i wanted to do 2 chapters per day but unfortunately , idid not have the time
don't worry , i started to write here to get Criticism , the story is not updated atm because i don't have much time , still i'm trying to write when i can .
They know he is training , i think in the last chapter i said that he was slacking off because his mother wasn't there and he only trains in his lessons , after that he does nothing , that's why he could go steal a panty in his sister room as she was still training while he was doing nothing. As for if they're raising a child or a soldier , i would say that they see him as a soldier first without spoiling much. It's another world logic , where fighting and death is common . You should also never forget that my writing may just be bad 👀. I will do the following chapters in a package , so that the readers will have the complete developpement and there won't be frustation like there is on this one . If it's still bad after that , the problem is probably me . Anyway thanks for the feedback !
i think next chapter shall clear your confusion.
after 3 years
he can. the mother doesn't want him to be
indeed, he is . you should read what i answered to Badge Lucas_Sousa!
the mc is not like that because he is a child , he is perceived as a child by his family of course . you should read why i responded to Lucas_Sousa_7129 it may help you understand what i mean. thanks for the comment!
it's not about stats but something else