Review Detail of Pouya4133 in My new vampire family

FIrst i want to say that this is a very good and intresting novel but i believe it can be improve to a top noch one . i have a few suggestions i hope it can be of help ,first the combination of R-18 and evil mc is a killer so i think our mc shoulD have more scenes wiTh clear discription of torturing ,cockholding,and killing those he doesnt like dont get me wrong there were a few killings but they werent sth thrilling .second Thing i Think it will improve the story is that we didnt get to see the scenes that he was Experimanting his magic on the angles or others (there were no gores ) . and the last but most importent one is that the novel has too Few chapters if you could mass so people will wait until 50 or 60 has been released till reading it , i think if You could mass release it untill reasonable amount of ch have been released it will be awesome . the other thing that i suggest is changing the release ,5 per weak is too low if you could do 2per day it will be great