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Highly do not recommend. The characters are pretty much one dimensional, and the world building suffers from that heavily. The biggest problem though, its grammar. This pains me to say, but unfortunately, this is unreadable if English is your first language. Will you technically be able to read it? Sure. If you're used to reading novels MTLed around 2017, you'll be fine. The grammar does not improve over time however, and I guess this is just the unfortunate case of author likely not being a native speaker of English. If you read the first chapter, you have a good idea of what the rest of them will look like grammar wise.
Tbh you should read to end of volume 2. Trust me. It has a slightly slow start, but once you get through the introduction chapters, it takes off. It's a huge arc, which keeps the intensity of V1 while being much larger in scale. I can't tell you anything about V3, because it's clear to me that this book is best read one volume at a time, so I'll wait for V3 to finish.
This is one of the few books I've seen that execute impossibly difficult adventures in grand fashion. The author doesn't tell you the journey was hard, he makes you experience it with the characters every step of the way. The arcs are not short, but no other novel on this site comes close to executing epic-scale arcs so well.
???? You mean reaction??? Not erection right???
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Who said this line? (Author clarification would be great here)
Ugh, but why is he provoking them when he can resolve it properly. Author doesn't like the "ability hiding" trope to generate fake hype, but this is even worse fake hype.
Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop. Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine). Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.
This luck is way too good no? Not a problem w/ me tho.
For reference, chapter 100 is soon after the first quest arc begins (92). I'm actually feeling the same thing as the reviewer. The issue is that filler description (i.e. it won't impact anything later on, nor does it improve the depth of the world) is taking up the majority of the chapter space, so the story is grinding along too slowly.
Kinda interested if it can be transmuted back to full durability after use.
Hi Author, you're probably looking for "feminine" rather than "feminist" here. (Feminist is a political term, and definitely out of place here)
Yep, he could've avoided this entire thing by showing his fake cultivation immediately.