Arubion_Gaming

While the story starts off fine, and progresses semi fast semi slow, it has a good breath of development. The only issue is how he is somehow always at the right place and right time to pick up everyone and anything. Then the whole riser power boost spit shining was beyond stupid, as he should've just cubed and killed riser with the shrine. The fact it evolved to riser gaining powers with god tier comprehension made little to no sense. While an ambitious take on the pieces given, they're assembled like a broken jigsaw puzzle.

As a story it has plenty of lore and flow, it may jump a bit weirdly and come off a bit sluggish. But my main issue is the grammar and choice of words making it feel what could be an amazing story clunky. The main character does seem to brown nose a bit to much, but otherwise a refreshing dynamic.

I feel like these pass few chapters could've been a single chapter. But the chapters feel shorter and are just saying the same information from multiple points of view and stuff. It's stalling for content.

Honestly quite mid, the chapters have been fine and all but this cliche possession stuff that throws all normal plans out the window just doesn't feel good. I'ma have to drop as possession is bad, and it's ruined the storyline for me. He's quite literally exposed the Kamen Rider to a place that has known spies for a lot of orgs and now it's known to everyone.

Overall it's a decent novel that puts to shame some of the others I've read from Chinese authors. The main issue outside of the poor translations are the things that aren't named correctly and that there are multiple 5 star ratings that are bot copy paste ai stuff as they all say the same thing but in a slightly different way using larger words then 95% of the other reviews you can find on normal novels.

It's not the worst one that I've read but it could use some warnings like heavy AU or off the rails plotline. Or something like condensed plot. As the Harry Potter world had it's story merged down to a month or less of what should've had at least 6-8 months worth of content. Which could've kept the same with time skips. Or by not 100%ing the side missions. Feels kinda bad when authors break plot lines in order to complete all their side quests they make for the points they'll end up using to make stuff overpowered.

The story is a rather nice touch with some refreshing ideas on the Oshi no Ko anime. The only downside to this story is that it tries to come off as a spy x family story but it's more like a John Wick story with its marker like assassination the same thing John Wick had to complete to quit being an assassin in the first place. This doesn't make it bad but I'd hope there's either more spy x family references or just making a new title and remove said references that don't involve the story.

Tsunade would never go along with anything in the story, and would quite literally destroy the main character and everyone who would tried. So outside it being unbelievable it's just forced plot with fake personalities. I'd suggest adding a Heavy AU NTR tag since it's about as believable as a cow on the moon without being in any type of oxygen enclosure

While it could worse, the fact Bella is the love interest borderlines ntr given their weird destined partner bull, and the fact the character seems like a flimsy piece of paper despite being the equivalent of a racecar vs a snail.

Something I find also funny is how protego is something that even most ministry employees can't cast let alone general wizards so Khan is fairly powerful as is, if you don't count the ancient magic, which leaves just experience.