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GinOokami
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After like, some years of not reading Einlion's work, it is honestly surprising he would write something like this. Not really a bad read, but I doubt webnovel readers would like it. But hey, what do I know about others? Well anyway, let me explain the rating that I gave. There maybe some spoilers, so be warned. TL;DR, give it a read before you decide anything.Writing quality:The writing is easier to read. The use of punctuation is certainly almost a blessing, because some writers really (I mean, REALLY) like to use run-on sentences. But, that is to be expected from Einlion. So a good job there.Story Development:The progress of the story is in a good pace. Not too fast, but not too slow either. Each chapter feels like its a new day in that world. Yes, there is a big time-skip somewhere at the start of the "arc". But I think that skip is appropriate, because I definitely don't want to read many chapters that is basically summoning people. There isn't any serious plot, so I don't have any comment for that.Character Design:Because the plot is basically "having sex 4 days a week", there isn't anything major I can comment on regarding the MC himself aside from MC becoming a bit too deviant. But that's the power of having sex with multiple partners can do to a man.Update Stability:I don't expect a chapter or two a day like his old work used to be. So long as Einlion has 2 to 3 chapter updates per week, I'm good.World Background:Nothing I can say about this one, because the world background is just an island with a long-ass tower. But, the world building is certainly in a good direction.Overall, a good past time. I think you should give this a try before deciding on anything. You should keep in mind that there isn't anything serious about the story, so don't go in expecting it. Also, if a dick in your ass can make you gay (if you enjoy it, of course), a bit of lesbian play doesn't mean she's a changed woman...for now. Lol

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Beta Testing the Apocalypse

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GinOokami
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All that spacing... just gone