Curiously, with the increase in the gang, she may have more channels to buy spare parts for cyborgs and heavy weapons. Borg are very rich clients, and working with stable and competent Borg should be very popular. She can also buy heavy weapons from the guy who will soon go awol, it confuses me that she does not have the right weapons to cope with serious opponents. In addition, after the war, it should be much easier to acquire heavy weapons, military implants, as well as the remains of defeated dragoons and other military cyborgs? I think it should be possible. In addition, it is a bad idea to seem like a borderline cyberpsycho, a fully stable dragoon will frighten much more, it will also give more opportunities for cooperation. Taylor needs to collect a protection fee, there is nothing shameful about this, it is essentially a security fee, the absence of a protection fee will only arouse suspicion. I wonder how the gang culture will develop over time, will there be special signs for their own, slang, rituals? Although now this gang looks like a bunch of loafers. I also have to point out one mistake, terrestrial implants work poorly in space and not for long, there is always a chance of breakage. In space, you need to use modified versions of implants. I liked the idea of replacing the rocket launcher with a turret, but it's not very useful against serious opponents. Although, maybe a Gauss turret? In any case, since Taylor cannot purchase suitable missiles, she should make a rocket block for those missiles that she can purchase. It seems that rockets for the projectile launching system should be easier to buy? I'm not sure if they can be controlled during the flight. But these are rockets! And yet this turret should be very useful for killing mobs, can it be combined with missiles? For example, a turret does not necessarily have to have only one type of weapon, the ability to fire several missiles would be very useful. You can even use a folding mechanism from the implant of a manual launcher, so that the missiles in the inactive state are hidden and protected. When I wrote about this, I was thinking about the terminator bmpt turret, only with hidden missiles in an inactive state.

My favorite moment in anime.

Cool chapter, sorry I can't leave comments on sb, my registration requests have already been ignored twice. I hope dragoon will become her fourth body, although Taylor is not worried about cyberpsychosis, will she feel blind and weak in other bodies after the experience of using dragoon? In cyberpunk, style is above everything else, I hope Taylor not only modifies the dragoon, but also decorates it coolly. A faceless war machine sounds boring. As for the repair parts, the obvious option that for some reason no one mentioned, Arasaka robots. Arasaka succeeds in robotics, so using the components of their combat robots, you can not only not lose productivity, but also get a small increase in it. You can also use parts of other cyborgs, and even parts of combat armor. Although other cybernetic bodies are mostly inferior to dragoon, they have a lot of cool technologies that can be used for modification and repair. You can also use parts from outdated military implants, they should have more redundancy and they are probably easier to get, as well as parts from expensive modern ones with greater performance, but less reliability and some weaknesses that Taylor will be able to compensate by combining all options and demonstrating his skills. I hope you will pay due attention to the dragoon, it's like tuning a car, only cooler. And I would change or modify the head, because the standard one looks pretty ugly... In fact, the standard dragoon has a sensory array in the form of rabbit ears, I think it fits the theme of a valkyrie or maybe elves. Or a rabbit. The standard dragoon has huge legs. It remains to become the grandmaster of panzerfaust and defeat Adam Smasher. I wonder how their relationship would have turned out.

Interestingly, it sounds like Adam is feared as some kind of evil spirit.

If cyberimplants spread among civilians, superheroes will surely appear whose abilities are associated with them. Whether it's a tinker or someone who strengthens the installed implants. Regarding Taylor's father, obviously this man is too "hero" for his own good, either he will die powerless one day, or he will receive superpowers/implants with Taylor's help, or he should be chained to the bed so that he does not accidentally die. Well, or let the situation take its course. By the way, I'm not sure in what year in the cyberpunk universe it will be possible to load a chip with combat skills into the brain? The guy who bullied David could have done it. As far as I understand, there is no such possibility yet, since Taylor herself trained with a monostrune. I just thought this thing would help a lot of superheroes.

You should write a parallel story. It's quite interesting, but I didn't invest as much in this taylor because of its infrequent appearance.

I was expecting more than one chapter, you just whetted my appetite and it was all over at once. I haven't felt literally hungry for a new chapter in a long time. You are too good.

Up to a certain point, I liked this story despite its problems. The cultivation system is interesting and non-standard, the plot was not bad, BUT the main character very much, I repeat VERY likes to get the best possible foundation during cultivation. This in itself is not a problem, but there are no restrictions on "strengthening the foundation", which at some point destroys the entire cultivation system. In his cultivation stage, he should be able to destroy planets to the maximum, but the protagonist, having released all his power, can destroy the galaxy. I'm not kidding, strengthening the foundation has gone too far. How can you read this shit with a straight face?

I just came up with the idea to cross cyberpunk and warhammer 40k, it would be great if someone finds drawings of implants from cyberpunk, something like a historical archive of outdated technologies created during the dark era of technology. In other words, a museum. This should not fall into the mechanicus bins and no longer see the sun, but spread among the armies of the imperium, for example, the same guards. The spread of cyberimplants can be handled by one of the gears, and in combination the main character who discovered this museum and wants to help humanity. After the fall of Kadiya, tolerance for such things is likely to increase greatly. Ordinary people seriously lack love in the world with demons, astartes and tyranids, the same Sandevistan or Kereznikov would help them in battles with enemies who move too fast for the human eye to notice them. A man loaded to the brim with implants could become a serious combat unit in this dark future. There are so many people that among them there will surely be many unique people like David and Adam Smasher, who can be assembled into an elite fighting force or used as heroes. Tech-priests will probably be able to defeat cyberpsychosis by praying or modifying implants, because they have remnants of more advanced technologies in which this problem is solved.

Elves, dwarves, halflings are not much different from people. Their bodies and minds are human, they are more like a species of humans than another race. Although the Eldar from Warhammer 40,000 are mentally very different from humans, and their bodies seem to be semi-crystalline?

Author, now I'm a big fan of yours. The story is deep, but it is easy to read, it is clear that you are not only good as a writer, but also have an extensive stock of knowledge, which you do not hesitate to demonstrate, thereby adding depth to the world. I read all the available chapters, interrupting only for sleep and food, although the premise seemed too confusing and unimpressive. In fact, it didn't seem to me, she really is. I strongly doubted whether to read or not, leaning towards the fact that this should not be done, but I decided to take a leap of faith. And I didn't regret it. Although I don't really like reading stories with a female protagonist, Taylor is an interesting character who doesn't annoy me. I look forward to seeing how the world of cyberpunk will change, especially since she has the opportunity to influence its development.

The story is getting worse. When the main character designed the mechs of the third class, they felt more real, not as disconnected from reality as the mechs of the second class. In addition, my favorite part was reading short stories describing the combat experience and reaction of the owners of the new mechanism. Ves has tried its best to give its products tangible benefits. He found interesting details, created synergy, and selected a budget. What now? He creates a boring product and makes it "alive" The main character has become a disgusting monopolist who does not try at all. Recently, his products differ only in weapons and glow. To be honest, live mechs currently offer few tangible benefits other than aura. Remove the glow and no one will buy them. They are not interesting and cause only disgust. I could tolerate it, but the development of the story pisses me off. His mechs are intelligent. Every product he has sold is developing in the direction of gaining intelligence. And he's not against it. I want to ask, then why do mechs need people? The author destroys what I fell in love with this story for. The main character creates a race competing with humanity, right now they demand equal rights with people. These are no longer mechs, but a race of synthetic humanoids. But that's not what the name promises! This also applies to the rest of the story, where are the mechs? Why do I read about how the main character's fleet is freaking out? Does he explain it by inspiration? Nonsense! You can get the same information and draw the same conclusions through video. Many explanations are also stretched. The author has lost the original intention of the story. How well the story began. The hero created mechs, kept his company afloat. Now he has focused only on the metaphysical component of the mechs, and they themselves are given pitifully little attention, the designs are formulaic and boring. He is locked in an ivory tower and despite the constant movement of the fleet, nothing changes. He only contacts high-ranking people because of his status. How he ended up in this position is explained reasonably, but it's not interesting to read this.

Like Prometheus, who gave fire to people, consequences awaited him. The weakness of a man from the era of people. I use a translator, so sorry.

The gods are not fools, if this happens, they will remind people that there are gods above the heroes. To die killing or injuring a god is a great feat for a hero symbolizing defiance.

Author, can we do without pills? Too many characters in Chinese novels are alchemists, can you make the character a formation master for a change?

Author, will you continue your previous fanfiction?

But after all, one could pretend that these characters do not exist, and not be accepted into the harem. It's late, but it's a fact.

To be honest, Liliana and Erika annoy me. They are empty, the purpose of which is obvious from the very beginning, to take a place in the protagonist's harem, they are static and do not develop. Just soulless puppets and targets to capture, even their characters are standard templates, the author's attempts to give them zest were unsuccessful. Join my hymn of hate.