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The story is getting worse. When the main character designed the mechs of the third class, they felt more real, not as disconnected from reality as the mechs of the second class. In addition, my favorite part was reading short stories describing the combat experience and reaction of the owners of the new mechanism. Ves has tried its best to give its products tangible benefits. He found interesting details, created synergy, and selected a budget. What now? He creates a boring product and makes it "alive" The main character has become a disgusting monopolist who does not try at all. Recently, his products differ only in weapons and glow. To be honest, live mechs currently offer few tangible benefits other than aura. Remove the glow and no one will buy them. They are not interesting and cause only disgust. I could tolerate it, but the development of the story pisses me off. His mechs are intelligent. Every product he has sold is developing in the direction of gaining intelligence. And he's not against it. I want to ask, then why do mechs need people? The author destroys what I fell in love with this story for. The main character creates a race competing with humanity, right now they demand equal rights with people. These are no longer mechs, but a race of synthetic humanoids. But that's not what the name promises! This also applies to the rest of the story, where are the mechs? Why do I read about how the main character's fleet is freaking out? Does he explain it by inspiration? Nonsense! You can get the same information and draw the same conclusions through video. Many explanations are also stretched. The author has lost the original intention of the story. How well the story began. The hero created mechs, kept his company afloat. Now he has focused only on the metaphysical component of the mechs, and they themselves are given pitifully little attention, the designs are formulaic and boring. He is locked in an ivory tower and despite the constant movement of the fleet, nothing changes. He only contacts high-ranking people because of his status. How he ended up in this position is explained reasonably, but it's not interesting to read this.

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