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KikiLovesRainbows

KikiLovesRainbows

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I love romance and I'm an aspiring author! I'm still young so my writing still needs work, but I hope you reed my novels and watch me steadily improve! I hope you enjoy my novels <3

2019-02-09 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows2yr
    Commented

    ur gay

    Ch 4 The Slave King
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    An Angel's Requiem
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Commented

    I really love this! It's such an interesting story and I love how it was written. The characters are all dynamic and interesting and the writing is fluent and easy to read. I can't wait for more! [img=recommend]

    Ch 3 Interference
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    An Angel's Requiem
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Commented

    What can I say, It's as amazing as usual! I can't wait for more and am loving the story idea!

    Ch 1 The Seventh Sin
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    An Angel's Requiem
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Commented

    it isn't bad but I feel like descriptions are really lacking and the writing itself is very lacklustre. Also why do I need to know that his boots were made of steel? I think it's a nice try but it does need improvement. The story idea isn't bad but its just the writing itself that I find a bit awkward. I'm sure you will do better next time good luck!

    Opening his eyes, he looked at the person in front of him. The person was not as Andre expected she would be. His boots were made from steel. As his gaze moved forward, that person was a white-haired woman wearing full-plate armor. It was totally weird. If she was a soldier, she could have worn the same combat uniform that Andre currently wore.
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    Modern Demon System
    Fantasy · Blare_
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Commented

    Ooh its good!

    Ch 1 The Sin of Hate
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    This Broken World.
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Replied to Asriel_Lynis

    I'm sure people will like it! I definitely did :)

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    This Broken World.
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Posted

    I love how so far there's only one chapter but it's already amazing! I love the ideas behind it and the powers that you have given. I think this ism ust so well thought out and can't wait for more! A lot of potential :)

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    This Broken World.
    Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
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  • KikiLovesRainbows
    KikiLovesRainbows3yr
    Commented

    Umm so I'm the author! I hope you like the first chapter! <3

    Ch 1 Chapter One : Psycho
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    Poisonous Revenge
    History · KikiLovesRainbows
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