KikiLovesRainbows

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I really love this! It's such an interesting story and I love how it was written. The characters are all dynamic and interesting and the writing is fluent and easy to read. I can't wait for more!

What can I say, It's as amazing as usual! I can't wait for more and am loving the story idea!

it isn't bad but I feel like descriptions are really lacking and the writing itself is very lacklustre. Also why do I need to know that his boots were made of steel? I think it's a nice try but it does need improvement. The story idea isn't bad but its just the writing itself that I find a bit awkward. I'm sure you will do better next time good luck!

Ooh its good!

I'm sure people will like it! I definitely did :)

I love how so far there's only one chapter but it's already amazing! I love the ideas behind it and the powers that you have given. I think this ism ust so well thought out and can't wait for more! A lot of potential :)

Umm so I'm the author! I hope you like the first chapter! <3