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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems24d
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    keep up the good work [BTW Amora/Enchantress mind controlling thor in the begining reminds me of Gacha marvel, you read that one author?

    Ch 45 Attack on Hero Part 12
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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    godofsystems1mth
    Commented

    previous chapter armmaster told him to be grateful for they will provide tv so... yh.

    A whole day of waiting in a room with the smallest collection of books that could be deemed 'a collection'. My room had no windows, no T.V, no access to internet, not even a puzzle to waste my time with. It was like they were trying to get a reaction out of me by keeping me waiting...
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    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Book&Literature · Niggross
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    godofsystems2mth
    Commented

    wonderful chapter as always. Keep it up man, or woman, or whoever you are.

    Ch 15 My Anger, My Pride, My Weakness Part 1
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Honor Is Useless To Me
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    godofsystems9mth
    Commented

    Wait author is this attack on titan? I mean that sounds like the ending...

    The page had a drawing of a woman with short black hair and black eyes, wearing a white buttoned shirt with a cream-colored coat and a long grey skirt that reached her ankles, she was sitting under a tree near a small rock, touching the scarf around her neck while looking at the bird that flew off in the distance.
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    Why A Dimensional Chat Group?
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems9mth
    Posted

    I love this story. Honestly one of the best marvel stories on this site, and probably all of marvel fanfics. It's even got me rethinking how I should plan and write my own stories. Anyways, lets get into it: Writing Quality: 3/5 -It's understandable, but not correct. quite a few times while reading it would switch for example he/she and himself/herself with the wrong person, combine words or simply typos. You can still read it and correct the grammar like a filter in your head, but that might simply be me. Stability of Updates: 3/5 -the author doesn't post as often as someone would like. you can check Table of contents to see yourself. In 62 chapters, its been an entire year and likely some months. However, while it is only 62 chapters the amount of words per chapter simply is crazy. Each chapter I believe self nearly maximizes the word count. EACH CHAPTER. so it is still a long story. And besides, this is a fanfic. One can update whenever they like to. Story Development: 5/5 -The story flows in my biased eyes, but also objectively, extremely good. Like, smooth butter good. It is of course goes linear, however the author is willingly and has skipped certain chunks of things, with no problems. How the MC power and influence develops and all the reaction's is worth it. And one thing this author can really do? Payoff. No spoilers or anything, but one of the things that since the start of the story was only now solved. No, it wasn't delayed or denied for stupid reasons, It was in the background, happening and moving but not the main focus. By chapter 62, it has ended, and what a payoff in the story. Btw, there is no nerfs or illogical things that really happen in the story. Everything has a sound, thoughtful thinking and action within it. Also, Author never nerfed and likely will never nerf the MC, as well as great power progression. Character Design: 5/5 -Every, single character feels fleshed out. They are not one dimensional at all. Even Bad guys, or minor side characters. The author does this by not only letting us observe through the MC, their actions and how they aren't retarded at all. Also, the use of different POV's is a stable in this. By switching it we see different perspectives, and none to me, especially the main cast so to say, are one dimenstional. Hell, the relationships feel genuine too. In a fanfic, on webnovel, the relationships feel Human. it's crazy. Word Background: 5/5 -Obviously, fanfics have a huge headstart with an already established Background, but as the author here does, he adds his own twists into it. the background here is a mix between comics and MCU. And that is so simply yet so ingenious. The MCU plotline for the major events, but with comics mix between, so for example: The alien invasion on new york not only happens earlier but with more heroes [not including the mc] and villains. [And here again there was a setup and payoff of the invasion.] In short, I would recommend to anyone to read this fanfics, so long as grammar and spelling isn't a big deal and you can get through it, you should read this. Although let me say this: -If you come to read pure wish fulfillment this one is not it - come here purely for that harem and smut, nah bro, this is not the one for you. -if you can't accept if the MC[Author] does something that really makes common sense to do in that scenario and that the MC is mature and isn't like a Cultivation MC who slaps all who insult him, not for you. Other than that, Enjoy this one!

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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems10mth
    Commented

    so my understanding is that shikamaru believes and 'found out' that Sasuke is just playing and doesn't really care about anything? Like shogi, he is just playing ninja?

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    godofsystems11mth
    Commented

    nice chapter, keep it up

    Ch 22 Investigation and Conjecture
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    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
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    godofsystems11mth
    Commented

    this has potential. Keep it up author!

    Ch 2 A whole new world.
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    I am entirely average...but was reincarnated with Spider-Man's powers?
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems11mth
    Commented

    solid story so far. I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work.

    Ch 12 Head of the Hag
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    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
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    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    author how much backlog of this do you have? Or are you writing this fast cause its crazy. Keep up the work. Enjoying what you're doing here. Take my stones!

    Ch 41 Chapter 40
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    BNHA: Singularity
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Posted

    This just reminded me of old me when I used to watch this. Stopped midway in the series and have no idea how it ended, but just cause you are writing this, imma give you 5 stars.

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    Origins of olympus au
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Posted

    oh boy this is a great read. instead of opinion let me give you facts. facts of this story and compare it to you're average fanfic: average fanfic -readable grammar -fast paced -one dimensional characters are common - nothing intresting happens - wish fullfilment jerk off - Annoying mc - plot holes. List could go on. Now this fanfic? Marvel:Re-Do - Great grammar. Very little to what I noticed - Good paced story with time skips to make things feel like its moving faster than what it is. You will see after like the first 10 chapters. - Characters here feel real. Some crazy but that's on purpose. Character interaction feels legit and like you're reading someone actually talk to a person. Not perfect but great. -Interesting shit happens, and it happens quick. -in relation to previous one, Interesting things happen that may or may no go our mc's way. -Mc doesn't feel annoying, and has good character development. -none that I remember or noticed really - Power progression is good because of the mc's power is perfect for it but it isn't fast nor to slow really. Perfect abiliy really. ( if you want to know what it is and some early things that happen that kicks off the story scroll down bro has adaptability and is a mutant. Get's captured by hydra so they can make super serum and soldiers out of it and also train him to become one as well. The process wasn't easy because his blood can adapt and shit.

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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    thank you author, this is amazing story so far. Keep it up!

    Ch 17 CHAPTER 16
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    lets goooo the escape begins!

    Ch 17 CHAPTER 16
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    it's 99k words now.

    Words: 15K
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    My Self-Insert Stash
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Posted

    The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.

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    Incomplete System in Marvel
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    this is pretty good, although i'm not sure spending two chapters on just his mind was the best, its okay and i understand why he's doing it. go further, and beyond author. ps: Imma give a review once this reaches 25 chapters. This really has potential man.

    Ch 13 CHAPTER 12
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    at the same time though, all of it is on a whim. A messiah would be someone actively doing good work, you knw going around helping out constantly. All he really is doing things because he can and why shouldn't he?

    "Just so we're clear, I'm only about to resurrect the kids who are actually buried here, if you want anyone who isn't kept here back, you'll have to contact their families first and have them bring their bodies here."
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Commented

    fair enough

    "I'm not a genie, I'm not going to change every single thing someone asks of me. If I happen to be in a good mood when I hear about a problem, I might step in, but this is charity on my part. I am not at the beck and call for Genosha or anyone else and I am not here to solve everyone's problems. As far as I'm concerned, my duty ended with Regenesis and reversing M-Day."
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    Reality Warping in Marvel (A Crooked Man)
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
    Replied to Dayside

    true, although I don't think it would be so easy for him to go through the mc shield. Not impossible, but most not easy.

    Even if the Professor used his immense telepathic might, he wouldn't be able to break through my mental shield.
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    The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction
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