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The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.

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