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oh boy this is a great read. instead of opinion let me give you facts. facts of this story and compare it to you're average fanfic: average fanfic -readable grammar -fast paced -one dimensional characters are common - nothing intresting happens - wish fullfilment jerk off - Annoying mc - plot holes. List could go on. Now this fanfic? Marvel:Re-Do - Great grammar. Very little to what I noticed - Good paced story with time skips to make things feel like its moving faster than what it is. You will see after like the first 10 chapters. - Characters here feel real. Some crazy but that's on purpose. Character interaction feels legit and like you're reading someone actually talk to a person. Not perfect but great. -Interesting shit happens, and it happens quick. -in relation to previous one, Interesting things happen that may or may no go our mc's way. -Mc doesn't feel annoying, and has good character development. -none that I remember or noticed really - Power progression is good because of the mc's power is perfect for it but it isn't fast nor to slow really. Perfect abiliy really. ( if you want to know what it is and some early things that happen that kicks off the story scroll down bro has adaptability and is a mutant. Get's captured by hydra so they can make super serum and soldiers out of it and also train him to become one as well. The process wasn't easy because his blood can adapt and shit.

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MARVEL: RE-DO

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