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I just wanted to give a normal review but I can't judge because there are only 2 chapters. I want the author to keep posting so we can give our honest review ๐๐๐
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man....are you sure the writing is concise. It keeps mixing things that's hard to understand
I stopped reading after the first chapter so you don't have to worry about that. I'm not interested in being an audience to some narcissistic author too
you are justifying everything he does.
Man you don't have to make everything clear. Have you never heard of the saying " Show not tell" All the talking makes it worse. Don't you have faith in your readers. We shall conclude everything, don't conclude everything without letting us think ourselves.
I'm your audience. I'm the one who reads what you present.