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lal1ka

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2019-01-24 JoinedBrazil
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka10mth
    Replied to KaiAoihana
    Ch 1501 Wait for Me
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    It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future
    Sci-fi · Madam Ru
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka10mth
    Commented

    3 years

    Ch 1501 Wait for Me
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    It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future
    Sci-fi · Madam Ru
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Replied to lal1ka

    And congratulations 👍

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    Villain Is on Vacation
    Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Replied to Madwriter_2377

    In my opinion, the main character is flat - his thoughts and actions have no depth - and the story fails to show instead of tell. You'll improve as you write! I hope I didn't discourage you. Good luck 🍀

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    Villain Is on Vacation
    Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    The main character acts like a 10 year old. 😅

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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    I expected a lot more from a novel ranked so highly.

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    Villain Is on Vacation
    Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    It's a start, I guess. Good luck, Author...

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    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    Wow. I'm only on the ninth chapter, but... wow.

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    HAREM HOUSE
    Urban · Monica1
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    Congratulations to the author for creating this masterpiece!

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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Commented

    She will court death with hearts in her eyes and a bouquet of flowers picked straight off her grave.

    "Bullshit your ass! So what if she comes across a similar situation again? Worse than that, what if her enemy has the same combat power, or is even stronger? She will be only courting death."
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Commented

    Girl or boy, anyone killing for the first time will tremble.

    The bandit knew that the moment he moved a single muscle, Roan's sword would cut through his throat, so he would be dead even faster. In the end, he could only look as Malaka raised her Staff. However, everyone could see how her hands were trembling. She is an 8 years old kid and a girl at that. So she obviously had difficulty doing it. One could even see the tears accumulating under her eyes. Of course, Roan didn't care one bit.
    altalt
    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Commented

    Orb 姐姐 might be a cute nickname in Chinese, but in English it's... awkward. Miss Orb would sound more natural.

    "Come on, it is also for our own sake. If Sister Orb decides to keep us here, wouldn't it be useless even if you want to leave? It will be a lot better to get on her good sides, and you know that too. Besides, she did help us back in the forest, so we own her this much."
    altalt
    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    Good if you want to... get riled up. Not much for anything else.

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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    Wow. I have no words for this. What is this? An unfunny joke?

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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    This story had a lot of potential, ruined by lackluster world and character building. Nevertheless, congratulations to the author ⭐️ for writing nearly 2000 chapters!

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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Posted

    Here's a blend of 1 Mary Sue, 10 Gary Stus, and the generic story you can find anywhere... enjoy!

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    The Supreme Divine Concubine
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka1yr
    Commented

    The notebook is red, has jaws and fangs. How the heck couldn't he connect the dots?

    The object plastered on the centre of the book started to glow, and suddenly, the book began to float, hovering until it was on eye-level with Quinn.
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka3yr
    Replied to SamsaraWithWords

    You found the perfect gif. [img=recommend]

    In a black tuxedo, his imposing tall handsome presence loomed over the room, as everyone whispered amongst each other.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka3yr
    Replied to haakuman

    Reach out to an old friend. Who knows? It worked for me.

    '…Friends.' To Ben, that word was like an idiom in a foreign language; He knew the translation, but he didn't understand the true meaning. 'When was the last time I had a friend outside of chat rooms?'
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • lal1ka
    lal1ka3yr
    Commented

    Author, I think you exaggerated the exclamation marks.

    It wasn't a splash but an explosion! Water shot up dozens of feet into the sky! Nearby animals ran in terror!
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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