Review Detail of lal1ka in Villain Is on Vacation

Item: Villain Is on Vacation
Rating: 1.2

Review detail

lal1kaLv21yrlal1ka

I expected a lot more from a novel ranked so highly.

Villain Is on Vacation

Madwriter_2377

Liked it!

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Madwriter_2377AuthorMadwriter_2377

Tell what is wrong. I will try to improve...

1yr

lal1kaLv2lal1ka

In my opinion, the main character is flat - his thoughts and actions have no depth - and the story fails to show instead of tell. You'll improve as you write! I hope I didn't discourage you. Good luck 🍀

Madwriter_2377:Tell what is wrong. I will try to improve...

1yr

lal1kaLv2lal1ka

And congratulations 👍

1yr

Madwriter_2377AuthorMadwriter_2377

Oh, Thanks.

lal1ka:In my opinion, the main character is flat - his thoughts and actions have no depth - and the story fails to show instead of tell. You'll improve as you write! I hope I didn't discourage you. Good luck 🍀

1yr