Shidachi

Thank you for giving us a tangible end. This has been a wonderful fanfic that I hope you continue as you work did as you wanted feel. We portrayed the emotions you felt as you wrote. So again thank you for this wonderful story may we meet again.

Could be, I will say that DC and Marvel are over saturated with a lot of fanfics right now. If you want to make fanfiction involving DC or Marvel, you will have to make it stand out. If not, it will be buried underneath all the fanfiction there before it.

repeat of last chapter

If it is actual criticism, accept it and try to use it to improve. Otherwise, ignore the flamers they are just trying to get a rise out of you, and they are just mad they do not have the confidence or skill to make something like this.

Thanks for the chapter, but could you use Mac Miller for the next song if possible.

Sorry, I like reading a lot and don't comment unless I give constructive criticism as I don't have my words to be empty.So far, I do not find any issues with writing besdes well pacing. As the pacing at times is inconsistent as some chapters flow smoothly, some are too fast, and some are too slow. I know it is because of the type of chapter that causes it, I am just pointing it out.

It is the abriviation of Dungeon Fighter Online.

I think this is better in comparison

You could also post this on Scibble Hub

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