GodPhaze

The name for the main character changed can you fix it im I'm chapter 92 and 93 area

Ok ... 1 interactive systems mostly don't sound good. 2 the use of master makes sound wost and just cringe overall all just hard to listen to for people who enjoy the read aloud function. In the future I recommend not using master or changing in to user if you feel you must use a interactive system at all. But that's all I have after trying the first two chapters... a better comment that the person who just put it's shit. But over all love the concept hope it improves and continues.

So I just checked Kakashi and zabuza should be around the same age at this point and not apart of the until after juzo biwa dies which is after itachi attacks the 3rd mizukage and dies

GodPhaze: Love this a totally new type of interaction with the marvel world a lot of stories seem almost copy and paste this stories gives a family vibe building with stark and allows him grow a develop quicker while making eager for the interaction between the main character and everyone else

Love this a totally new type of interaction with the marvel world a lot of stories seem almost copy and paste this stories gives a family vibe building with stark and allows him grow a develop quicker while making eager for the interaction between the main character and everyone else

Patreon gone again

Can't find the patreon

Naw that cliffhanger was diabolical I new you run me the next chapter ASAP

I agree with this 100% unless the person is experienced at making them work these are rules to live by from all the fanfics i read so far