woow every books first chapter is very imp to catch the readers interset i would like to appreciate this chapter as a reader it was nicely done intresting funny and it sounds silly but really gun chapter hope the book is as much fun .

me too I am looking forward too max engaging with his family don't really care about the mother son relationship but wanna see the reaction of his grandparents and his cute bro sis relationship

true they seem ignorant . I wanna see max engage with his family too

it's really nice story whith the background Character and development there needs a bit more suspens but it's fine with the way the story is going

yes we doo

yes we doo

nice although I whish it had more ch release per day

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Prty good

Good plot love it . The suspence can be a bit better but overall the plot story nd writings is really good. Transaction between different scene story Or chapters can be better. And alsoi love how the villains are charaterized cool and powerful as well and also love the fact that there are neutral overpowered character redy to pop up and surprize you.

Really good but i think the transaction between chapters Or plots can be better