Igbore

Don't write away his love life just yet....cos after alduin and stuff then what us left for him....is he supposed to just come be the dragonborn and die

4 chapters of fillers

immortality makes absolutely no sense to me the world is so why live forever....

this book used to be interesting and sensible but all of a sudden it took a nose dive and the story just refused to move forward like the author is just looking for a way to drag it out

where is this novel heading it keeps meandering

56 chapters still on d same thing

there is a kingdom building tag on your novel but I haven't seen any sort of building except the bicycle....

please keep the number of ladies in his life reasonable...4 tops don't go the Chinese route of 20 women....

I remember this guy knowing canon...and the dragons were Canon so yy d over reaction and emphasis

reading this again I find out it might not work....why should Harrold Arryn take his army to fight for someone who swore to serve another king.... He would have been more likely to take the weregild