TheOne8

The story just seems super bland. No real character development. I find myself scrolling and I don't lose anything of importance. Very little world building.

What is the Trade Union's gain by doing this? Either way, they get the same number of kps. Unless they control the underground exchange, the dont make an extra profit

This doesn't make sense. Are they part of the empire or not? Is it the empire that is after him, or the Royal Army? If it is the empire, then why does the Royal Army care if another faction knows? If it is the Royal Army, why would his family stay in the Royal Army's territory?

That's like 40 years worth of spirit stones. Too much...

But when he actually does something good and people see that he is strong, they might wonder if it is true. Having people remember you isn't the brightest idea.

What is the point of explaining this? He can do this without the flaw. The only way this would come into play is if someone knew his flaw and believed whatever he said based on that. Otherwise, there is no point in saying this. It is standard for everyone.

Why does he have to answer? Saying nothing or no comment isn't a lie. What, he has to answer every question someone asks him?

I think made him to be stupid. Can't think. So he wouldn't be able to say who injured him.

So guns don't work, but a bow does? Yeah right, there has to be something special about it.

And why did he decide to save her? Honestly, this (I don't care I can do what I want to do) act is getting tiring.