I was talking about other Fanfiction websites, Sufficent Velocity and Spacebattles are all good forums with creative writing sections that are used for fanfiction.

There are some other website with higher average quality if you wanna hear about them from me.

The grind is something everyone knows of, grind his cloud technique so much that it becomes like a instant teleport you can do short range with no repercussions.

Maybe rename the skill to Mental Corruption Resistance? Since Mental Corruption skill just sounds like he is insane.

I wonder if Ed is going to comment on the fact that he saw John in Paris when it was attacked.

Please just call him Po instead of Poo. Maybe Samehada can be a New World barnacles that absorb peoples stamina and after Jaws beats them in a fight he turns the Barnacles into a sword called Samehada

I will be greatly disappointed if he doesn’t get a sword like Samehada. Maybe Samehada can absorb life force to give Jaws more stamina.

The thing is that while Umbrella has advanced creations most of them are from the BS flower toxin, they still have the same computers and cameras there are in 1998. Try to use facial recognition on someone using a database from 1998.

I would much rather have Icarus give Jason some courage and try to make him a better person

I think it’s really dumb that his identity got found out so easily, RE2 was set in 1998. There were not that many cameras in the open that could get a accurate facial recognition.

I have some advice for the author, when you start a sentence make sure to capitalize it. “the house was big.” should instead be “The house was big.” Really liking it.

I’m pretty sure the “imperial father” was the old jade emperor who died and his power went to Huang, she thinks that Huang is going to be her missing father when he just actually only has the powers and no memories.

Yeah pretty sure that Huang is the reincarnation or inheritor of the Jade Emperor aka Imperial Father.

My theory is that Gu Yue will cut his private parts off.

I’m betting that Artemis gave MC her blessing for saving Atalanta. That’s why he feels safe in the forest.

Remember he ditched Daedalus, so he won’t get his wings.

This is what the Robe of the Sage looks like.

Then fuse all the spirit bones he found for the ultimate crafting material.

I wonder how he will get the Robe of the Sage, probably get it after killing dragon god and making it of his corpse.

Thanks for the explanation!