jamessword123

i was really enjoying the book. the jokes are fairly good a little over done at points. but i really don't like scarlet. she started off okay but after a while she just became annoying and dragged the whole novel down for me.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

The translation/ writing quality is just bad. The concept seems alright but the execution seems off. I only made it to chapter 15 before I had to stop reading.

The writing is real good. I enjoy the world you built. The personality of the main character is just not very good personally. A masterful ceo who has massive trust issues from multiple betrayals. suddenly becomes a 16 year old girl who becomes bffs with just about every girl who approaches her without any bad intentions. Then while she busy pretending that she is someone else with the demon princess that she befriended early on. she gets pissy when she doesn’t share what her and her father have been up too even though the humans and demons have been at constant war with each other. Just makes no sense imo. She is a 30+ year old master businessman who transmigrated. That has no clue how interpersonal skills work even though in like the first 3 chapters it goes over him learning these skills to make a new business after the last one was stolen from him. I just don’t like how her character seems to have character regression instead of character building. Most of the side characters are fine though mostly Cliché.

personally it feels a little more like the Grisaia series