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Soran242yrCommentedIf you could please try to make most of the world building early on.
This is a slow-paced novel. The reason being I want to develop the main cast as well as the side characters. I'll try to leave no one out. For the most part, it is slice-of-life. The world in the story is huge and I'm planning for a detailed world-building. Therefore, major plots which affect the main storyline will come late.- Soran242yrReplied to Soran24
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It feels more like neo chinese novel. While the location and hunter theme can mask the writing style the has more neo chinese elements. 1. the way he leveled up lacked excitement compared to "Seoul Station Necromancer" and "Only I Leveled Up" 2. The order in which he beat people up In chinese novels the usual order is goon>brother>uncle>father>grandfather too much cliche speeches making novel dull and too predictable 3.Although the author introduced game like elements he still uses profound elements like killing intent without a doubt he will introduce a technique where MC uses mana to strenghten part or his whole body.
- Soran242yrCommentedCh 80 Chapter 80 – The aftermath
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Ive never been to Brooklyn but I doubt any sane person would talk like that
"All of you bear witness that I am a customer and have done nothing wrong and if anything occurs, I cannot be blamed," announced Adam to the crowd. - Soran242yrCommentedCh 71 Chapter 71 – Magic Barrier
- Soran243yrReplied to BobstaCh 38 Adam Vs. Ken (2)
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The end of cultivation genre.
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unless this novel is a very short one your hope wont come true. there are also other authors who want their work to be free to read but sooner or later they would have to go premium because of the platform's policies. The only other way is for the author to release more chapters frequently but I dont see that happening.
Ch 38 Adam Vs. Ken (2) - Soran243yrCommented
I think it would be more comfortable for readers if you show images like this rather than in the comments,
***Image in the comments*** - Soran243yrCommented
what kind of name is that?
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When someone is a virgin at the age of 30: magician 40: sage 50:great sage 60: saint 70:god 80:. . . . . . dead
Ryan didn't want to think about it, but he could only do it for so long. He worked hard to make his parents proud of himself. Although becoming a PE teacher wasn't as difficult as becoming a lawyer or a doctor, he still could remember when his parents looked like when he told them about the career that he chose. He decided to work hard not just for them, but also to marry the woman he loved since he was just twelve… despite being a shy guy, he confessed his love for her in his third year of high school, and since then, they have been together. They even made some preparations to marry once things got a bit more stable… it probably would happen at the end of that year, but it looked like Mia never truly loved him. - Soran243yrCommented
is this story still active?
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