Torren

“legacy and higher gears and weapons” Gear has two meanings. One is rotating gears that connect to each other and the 2nd meaning is specialized equipment. The one you want is the 2nd meaning and is already in plural form. What it should say is, “higher gear and weapons”

The User Reviews are dogshit on this site. The only real way to judge the author fast is by reading the synopsis to see how they structure their words.

I think it’s the case in which multiple people with the same names are allowed

Bruh the economy is either pretty messed up, or goblin are pretty rare.

Technosad

Instead of “a lot of bloodsheds in one day”, say, “too much bloodshed for one day”.

The original might be good the translation could be better. The game’s mechanics are also kinda jank. Cps for a game with cool down? Really? Cps doesn’t mean shit if it’s a game with cool down. Timing is way more important. I read it a while ago and stopped when the games mechanics vs the incompatibility of the top players being the top became too much for me.

Perhaps I could help you with grammatical improvements to the novel? I’d like to think I am well versed in English considering I’ve lived in the US for quite a while. Is there any way I can contact you in order to send an edited version of the first chapter?

In the beginning, the story is great with good writing and decent characters with personality and quality. The background of the world is feudal Japan which is a totally average world background, nothing special. As the story progresses problems appear. The realism tag gets dumped straight out the window (aura and killing intent) and the side characters who has been with the mc gets mentioned less and less as the story gets lazier and the MC becomes unrealistically Op. And by unrealistically Op, I mean mystical mumbojumbo **** which was not mentioned in the story ever until it suddenly appeared in the monk arc it was wierd too cause that’s when the writing turned for the worse. It has been a good ride til it turned into a disappointment and reading slog.

Well, my current theory is that it’s just all a simulation that the ai has propped up for the main character. The story in the beginning has some big plot armor for our main mc as well as in the later parts of the story, veers off the “realism” tag like a drunk man driving a car whilst having a bottle in each hand. It gets all “he’s the chosen one” and chi attacks with the monks. The writing quality also gets worse from way better than webnovel writers to just a tad better than webnovel writers.