Review Detail of Stevefpx in I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

It's hard to read. It was good at first but the Mc became the slave to the system. His increase in realm is so pointless. He can just buy his product and increase but the system makes him do task for it. Second thing is, it is far from good. So many error in grammar and spelling. Compare to any store novel, I can barely finish it. Mc has no real Power. The system is stupid. Many can just kill the Mc while he is out of his shop. His products are still the same and the system wants to earn millions with just that.