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Mermaid_Man

Mermaid_Man

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2018-08-19 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man2yr
    Posted

    Honestly, The story starts oUt great and the Design of the world is great but the translation is so bad it ruins everything. this was going to be great but its so badly written.

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    Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints
    Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man2yr
    Commented
    The Apevolution
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man2yr
    Commented

    Soon

    June 10th, 2021, the now legendary archeologist Alexander Davis was in Mexico studying Mayan ruins. While inside one temple, he discovered a hidden passageway leading deep underground. After walking down a flight of stairs for around 10 minutes, he finally ended up in front of an enormous and spacious room.
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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man2yr
    Commented
    Ch 264 The First Offering
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    The Spider Queen
    Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man3yr
    Posted

    Im about 20 chapters in and this feels like a drag to read. The story has potential and the world is unique but I feel like its very rushed. I cant quite get how the abIlities of our character work or even what he is able to do due to lacking information thats not even being intentionally hidden. The level/system feels like it being forced in there by necessity due the premise of the story taking place in a vr game. Overall, there is great potential but it feels rushed and unpolished.

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    Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
    Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
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  • Mermaid_Man
    Mermaid_Man3yr
    Replied to xImpulse

    Looks like someone played early leaguE of legends

    He still had his ultimate, fuck me! Castiel cursed as he realized he had entered his opponent's trap.
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    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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