Review Detail of Mermaid_Man in Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power

Im about 20 chapters in and this feels like a drag to read. The story has potential and the world is unique but I feel like its very rushed. I cant quite get how the abIlities of our character work or even what he is able to do due to lacking information thats not even being intentionally hidden. The level/system feels like it being forced in there by necessity due the premise of the story taking place in a vr game. Overall, there is great potential but it feels rushed and unpolished.