Hydrogen8

This is like the one if the best fics I've ever read. Every chapter you post makes my day so I hope you continue.

This is one of the greatest Star wars stories I have ever read not just on this site but in general! This novel is a translation from what I believe is Russian and the translation quality is great! There are a few Russian words left untranslated in a few chapters but in my opinion they don't impede the readers ability to understand the text or enjoy the story. My only complaint of the story would be that it takes a little bit to adjust to using this -speaking- instead of this "speaking" for dialogue as other novels do. Each chapter is very long so getting a new chapter is always a joy. As far as I understand there are many more untranslated chapters left in this story so I hope the translations keep coming as they are really good.

The Venators mentioned here are supposed to be Victorys

Author just so you know your spelling Alexis and Syrus wrong as your writing Alexia and Sirius. Unless you're using some dubbed names different from the English dub.

+1

grimer

you are misspelling the names of the photon monsters. it should be Photon etc but instead you are putting Proton etc.

what's this pokemon

yes

international release