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Of course every thing goes easy for this master guy...writer really loves master, way more than mc. He made master smarter, stronger while he made jack a stupid guy who is just barely strong enough..at this point idk why is jack even fighting..its so easy for this guy to conquer countries that its pretty clear he will conquer at least 6 countries and half of jacks country before he is defeated...that is if he is actually defeated at all...with jacks nature he would probably forgive him for everything he has done and ask him to join him in fighting the underworld forces. This kind of writing is really testing my will to continue reading this novel..
Na..i waited years to read this book because i found it when it had around 500 chapters and i wanted it to get over at least 800 chapters so i could start binge reading.. But the death penalty is really bothering me way too much..around ch 40 or something they went on a A level quest and the entire player army got wiped out..u r telling me they worked hard for weeks to get exp, money, equipment and then they lost it all in just 1 death and that too in a battle where they are severely under leveled? As a gamer it bothers me too much coz i personally would never play that game again..and thats when they are lvl 1...what if they die when they are bit more higher level say lvl 10? Which takes them a month or so to reach? They go to lvl 1 just coz of 1 death? I know this is really good story so i wont give it 1* or something but i guess i cnt read it anymore.
I like the story so far. I dnt like the death penalty. No game with this kind of penalty would survive for a long time, specially mmos. It takes time to collect equipment, especially the high lvl ones, so if we just lost all of it because we died then thats a bad game. He could have made it -1 level/ death or 1 item lost..but all items is just bad
Fxk this...after reading the spoiler for ch 2182..i am out, i didnt know author was so dumb that he would even kill his wife for literally no reason at all..i m done here. Why the fk would anyone destroy established characters? Does he think that makes this story great somehow? What a waste of time..and i was so excited after reading 1400 chapters that he will become strong enough to protect everyone soon once he becomes a saint or sage but even when he is a demigod he still cnt save shit..fk this book
Idk if i should keep reading..i am around ch 430 or something and somehow a small citys random family has 3 suzerain myth level feys when we were told suz myth were peak creatures in the kingdom...if they are that peak then how are they everywhere? And suddenly everyone has one of them...somehow i feel the author isnt very consistent with what he says in thr story and also that his own feys growth is just so slow..i heard a spoiler that his fey reach myth around ch 2100...they are already fantasy..how did it take them 1700 chaps to cross 1 level in quality...someone pls tell me if i should continue this
really novel would hv been perfect if not for his fixation in going back to our world...like why? U r the one of the strongest man in the universe...u cn live for a long time even if its just a game ,the time passed, the powers,the people were real..what reason did he have to return to earth, so he could live like pathetic civilians like us? Living in mediocrity under tyranny of incompetent and stupid politicians? His reason and motivation for returning here was just so bad...he always treated everyone like npcs and people he could use for his benefit..if only he treated them like humans... Anyway still 5* in everything..but this ome factor of this story disappointed me so much
I like the story but the translation and editing are so pathetic...its sad that webnovel has fallen so much now that they can't even have a good editor edit the stories..for the forest hundred chapters the advanced level was also called rare, and the rare was also called rare...so it was rare then rare again...
Bro...why would u write a main character who only suffers the entire novel? I am at almost 800 chaps now and he is and probably will remain a pawn for the emperor and other gods till the end of the novel...whats even the point of this kind of MC? Y'all should add a new tag in ur story, #mc so weak that he cnt do shit...i loved the world building and things but the mc is just so disappointing and not because of his mary sue nature but because of the way writer is making him a bitch for everyone else..i will read it till the recent updates..if everything remains the same for the next 500 chaps and he is still a bitch for emperor and everyone then i am dropping..no point in reading a main character like this no matter how good the story gets
Chapter 573...i liked the novel i read 500 chapters in 2 days doing nothing else...but this getting ridiculous now. Why is he always fighting? Just because its a cultivation novel u cant keep him in danger all the time and no it doesnt make the story more exciting it makes it draining on the reader. U need to have a few good chapters with story in them in between acting as a buffer. But here the guy just keeps fighting from 1 place to another..and always so pathetically weak? When is he actually going to get strong? At the last chapter when the novel ends?
i have read till chapter 100 now... first for the author i hope before u write ur next novel u will read some good ones of that genre... second- if u wanted to skip the technological tree entirely and create everything out of thing air all u had to do was create a system which gave him automated factories which created those parts for the machines which could create all these stuff as long as they were provided with stuff for it like the ores and other things...the people would still have jobs and after the factories created these parts they could also have the job of assembling them...that way u didnt need to adhere to any limits on technology.. sadly u decided to somehow create these things in an era where its impossible for even a part of this to exist...and no u cant make something just because u have the relevant knowledge and raw materials...just creating the small parts of the guns would be impossible for anyone is med times...it takes precise machines for that..hand made parts would need hundreds of tries before they make something barely useable muchless perfect modern level products...where as somehow the people here are able to create them in one try as if they are blessed by hephaestus himself :O anyway i liked the world back ground and where the story was going....i would have loved to read more...i hope ur second book would be better and more fleshed out...good luck :)