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I feel like your writing is getting worse. I just do t understand Bil as a character. In your other novels the characters can have the flaws they have but Bil is just bad

Thanks for the comeback of a great story

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

One of the best stories ive read on this site. Ive read other novels by this author and thIs is the best edited so far. It is a great novel and this other writes compelling worlds. So far after reading 250+ chapters the author has written another great novel. The only problem i have had with previous novels is editing and this one seems to have a great editor to make this the best novel so far by this author. If the others are edited in the same way she has great world building and they could match this novel in where it is at so far.

I have read the first 100 chapters after the novel has been finished. It has an Intriguing story after 100 or so chapters to say the least but after chapter 20 or so the grammar gets annoying to look at. The editor did a great job with those chapters but the rest of the novel needs time to be edited. If ever edited it could be one of the best novels on this app. It is the best of the novels she has written so far and not unreadable if you can deal with multiple tense or pronoun issues. Those due do kill enjoyment for me personally but if you can look past that I think this is the best book she has written so far. Ive only read Flowers bloom on the battlefield or whatever it is called by her. Novel could ve fantastic in quality but needs a lot of editing.