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Cypmaster

Cypmaster

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2018-07-02 JoinedItaly
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  • Cypmaster
    Cypmaster4 years ago
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    Nothing is explained, the chapter are boring, and I find myself not caring about the MC. Or anyone else. Instead of letting us get to know him, he had only 5 lines of dialogue that weren't exposition. Why should I care if he gets stronger? I've already forgotten his name. The bully in the first chapter got more of a description than the MC. Good luck in the future but this story feels too much like the author is just vomiting tropes in order to get out a paid story. Too bad that he can't write at that level.

  • Cypmaster
    Cypmaster4 years ago
    Commented

    Mercury, like aluminium, isn't a ferromagnetic metal.

  • Cypmaster
    Cypmaster4 years ago
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