I like OP Isekai stories!
While it's a good idea to counter the power imbalance and make it an actual challenge for the MC, I don't see it working for this fic. A big part of this story, IMO, is from the family aspect that Hiro has built up for himself, and the Nightmare Mode would put them all at risk. If Hiro was solo traveling and leaving his family behind in each world, then Nightmare Mode would be a personal challenge and it wouldn't be an issue, but he isn't. I guess Hiro could travel into Nightmare worlds while leaving his family behind and visiting them often, but he won't really be able to bring them with him into new worlds ever before making it safe or training them a lot, which means that he will be taking away their own adventure from them.
Honestly, don't care how good you may or may not be, but commenters are toxic enough around here without authors randomly shitting on other fanfics for no reason. I'm not even reading Einlion's novel, this is just off putting though.
Support, Business and General Studies. There are four courses in UA. Not all of them joined to become heroes.
It seemed fun at first and the writing isn't too bad, and I even ignored the inconsistent timeline at first, but I don't like the MC, so the story isn't worth the time for me. Inconsistency comes in what looks like the author fusing the 2nd and 3rd wars together. First battlefield that MC is part of is against Suna, which is the 2nd war, and Sakumo Hatake who was already told was dead is alive and even has the event where he becomes hated by Chiyo for killing her kid. Then instantly there is the war against Iwa and Kiri which is the 3rd war. I don't like the MC because he has no goal besides growing stronger. He constantly notes how lazy he is. It's understandable for him to not want to draw attention, but he does it anyway because he wants to grow stronger. And there's no motive for growing stronger. If he just wanted to be left alone, he could've been a civilian. He has practically no people he cares for and avoids most interactions... He's just kinda there.
If it was made to protect the Byakugan then all Hyuga would've had it, not just the branch family.
Should be 20! If you drop after 10 minutes and climbing doesn't take time, then after gathering 3, instead of wasting another minute failing to gather another, just drop down and jump back up!
Does Bakugo really need a reason to pick up a fight?
The test probably focused on rescue with battle to hinder or stall them, and Bakugo is rather combat focused, winning is what heroes do is his mentality... Plus the experiences that would mellow him and give him better perspective didn't happen in this timeline, he didn't win against a conflicted foe in the sports festival, instead he was humiliated without putting up a fight, and he wasn't kidnapped with his heroic convictions put to the test and then saved by his classmates... And we don't see him with any friends, mainly Kirishima who got close to the MC instead...
A few chapters ago it states that Trunks was at 3 million base power before Guru unlocked his potential. at SSJ he would have 150 million. The future versions of the androids had to be around that level or slightly stronger... With the potential unlock Trunks would've had a decent fight against the two of them together and probably able to defeat them...
We never really had evidence of what happens to someone who dies due to age or disease, so it's possible...
Goku knowing all the planets and having instant transition can find New Namek in this timeline, I think that's part of the reasoning behind his wish. NN should exist, so they can get Dende to replace Kami. But remember that in this universe the dragon balls are restricted to recent deaths, so I don't think anyone that's dead for over a year can be revived. They could fix earth so it's not a ruin, but most people will remain dead.
Mecha Frieza was used as a plot tool to introduce future Trunks, which is pointless in this context. No reason to have him survive, and you can have him revived if you want Golden Frieza...
Maron trades intelligence for more boobage
That's awful. Yajirobe and Korin are great together, you are preventing the existence of the best DB couple!