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SliverFang

SliverFang

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I like OP Isekai stories!

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang14d
    Commented

    While it's a good idea to counter the power imbalance and make it an actual challenge for the MC, I don't see it working for this fic. A big part of this story, IMO, is from the family aspect that Hiro has built up for himself, and the Nightmare Mode would put them all at risk. If Hiro was solo traveling and leaving his family behind in each world, then Nightmare Mode would be a personal challenge and it wouldn't be an issue, but he isn't. I guess Hiro could travel into Nightmare worlds while leaving his family behind and visiting them often, but he won't really be able to bring them with him into new worlds ever before making it safe or training them a lot, which means that he will be taking away their own adventure from them.

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang2mth
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    *CRACK* *BOOM*
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Commented

    Honestly, don't care how good you may or may not be, but commenters are toxic enough around here without authors randomly shitting on other fanfics for no reason. I'm not even reading Einlion's novel, this is just off putting though.

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to dozkiller07

    Support, Business and General Studies. There are four courses in UA. Not all of them joined to become heroes.

    I notice some people not being satisfied with what I said and some were even insulted. Well, I know how to handle beta people like them. "You're people who got into U.A.... you are smart, so use that intellect."
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Commented

    Borderline?

    Nothing that suggested she knew Chad was borderline evil and wanted to take over the Earth politically and economically. That was made clear by her only blurting out how the Nargles were hiding her stuff, and not how Chad was trolling Professor Lockhart for his own amusement.
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
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    It seemed fun at first and the writing isn't too bad, and I even ignored the inconsistent timeline at first, but I don't like the MC, so the story isn't worth the time for me. Inconsistency comes in what looks like the author fusing the 2nd and 3rd wars together. First battlefield that MC is part of is against Suna, which is the 2nd war, and Sakumo Hatake who was already told was dead is alive and even has the event where he becomes hated by Chiyo for killing her kid. Then instantly there is the war against Iwa and Kiri which is the 3rd war. I don't like the MC because he has no goal besides growing stronger. He constantly notes how lazy he is. It's understandable for him to not want to draw attention, but he does it anyway because he wants to grow stronger. And there's no motive for growing stronger. If he just wanted to be left alone, he could've been a civilian. He has practically no people he cares for and avoids most interactions... He's just kinda there.

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to Mask
    Ch 27 Woodsy Adventure
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to chaoslegend209

    If it was made to protect the Byakugan then all Hyuga would've had it, not just the branch family.

    "I hate the caged bird seal in our family. My hobby is gardening and my dream for the future is to unite my clan together."
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to ssanstuff

    Should be 20! If you drop after 10 minutes and climbing doesn't take time, then after gathering 3, instead of wasting another minute failing to gather another, just drop down and jump back up!

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Commented
    2) No
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to HollowAshura

    Does Bakugo really need a reason to pick up a fight?

    Getting to the school we headed from the for the second term opening ceremony. The whole class 1-A was already there except Bakugo and Izuku. Meaning those two asshats fought on the school ground after curfew like in the canon and got detention.
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang3mth
    Replied to Scythe02

    The test probably focused on rescue with battle to hinder or stall them, and Bakugo is rather combat focused, winning is what heroes do is his mentality... Plus the experiences that would mellow him and give him better perspective didn't happen in this timeline, he didn't win against a conflicted foe in the sports festival, instead he was humiliated without putting up a fight, and he wasn't kidnapped with his heroic convictions put to the test and then saved by his classmates... And we don't see him with any friends, mainly Kirishima who got close to the MC instead...

    Momo finally returned home with a huge smile on her face and showed me her Provisional Hero License. I learned from her that the first fight was a battle royale instead of those ball battles in the first round. In the second round they had to rescue citizens but this time along with Gang Orca, Endeavour, and Best Jeanist attacked the camps. This time only 9 students from Class 1-A passed the exam. Izuku, Ochako, Momo, Mezo, Ilda, Fumikage, Jiro, Mina, and Eijirou.
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Replied to Urion_Limitbreaker

    A few chapters ago it states that Trunks was at 3 million base power before Guru unlocked his potential. at SSJ he would have 150 million. The future versions of the androids had to be around that level or slightly stronger... With the potential unlock Trunks would've had a decent fight against the two of them together and probably able to defeat them...

    Ch 68 Androids End and Future Restored
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Replied to Kira_Aurelius

    We never really had evidence of what happens to someone who dies due to age or disease, so it's possible...

    Goku asked "King Kai, if you knew all that happened, why didn't you help out?" King Kai listening to Goku's question said "We Kais or King Yama cannot interfere until the universe is under threat. We can't interfere for a single planet by sending a dead warrior from the otherworld." Goku nodded. "Ok. What happened to this world's Me and the others?" King Kai answered "You died of a disease and sent to reincarnation. Your soul must be reincarnated already. The others are in the otherworld". Goku then said "Ok King Kai. Point me to planet Namek. I'll go to Namek and atleast restore earth."
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    Goku knowing all the planets and having instant transition can find New Namek in this timeline, I think that's part of the reasoning behind his wish. NN should exist, so they can get Dende to replace Kami. But remember that in this universe the dragon balls are restricted to recent deaths, so I don't think anyone that's dead for over a year can be revived. They could fix earth so it's not a ruin, but most people will remain dead.

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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Commented

    Mecha Frieza was used as a plot tool to introduce future Trunks, which is pointless in this context. No reason to have him survive, and you can have him revived if you want Golden Frieza...

    (A/N: I had wanted frieza to survive after being blasted by trunks. That's why the chapter title has question marks. Let me know if you guys want him to survive or stay dead by tagging the comments to this paragraph and I'll decide depending on the votes.)
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Commented

    With Raditz, if he is considered righteous enough, Goku could already go through the super saiyan god ritual...

    Ch 45 Raditz training
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Replied to lok_98

    Maron trades intelligence for more boobage

    Goku and others congratulated them on their marriage. Goku also collected the Dragonballs as their wedding gift and wished for Yamcha and Mai to live healthy and have eternal youth. Mai cried tears of joy seeing thy she could get a wish from the dragon. Also thinking about all the hardships she went through to collect the Dragonballs only to fail. Shu also found himself a female humanoid wolf. But nobody cared about that. Krillin was also dating a girl called Maron and they stayed in the Kame house along with Master Roshi and launch.
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Commented

    That's awful. Yajirobe and Korin are great together, you are preventing the existence of the best DB couple!

    Goku stayed at King Kai planet for 9 months. In these 9 months, he had mastered all three techniques. He also could use Kaioken times 20 for a short time as his body is not yet fully grown. He checked his base power level which was an astonishing 9.7 million. So using 20x Kaioken, he could reach 190 million. He could beat Frieza if he mastered the Kaioken properly. He trained Kaioken by staying in Kaioken form as long as he could stand and fall down. Then he would use a senzu bean and start over again. He had thousands of beans anyway. And he planned on never letting yajerobie near korin tower.
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  • SliverFang
    SliverFang4mth
    Replied to KrooMorn
    While everyone was speaking, Puar came flying down "Guys, the base is deserted" he said. Goku nodded "When I heard that Bulma was kidnapped, I rushed down here, destroyed the base and rescued her." Hearing this everyone except bulma was utterly shocked. Roshi then asked "What are you up to these days Goku? How come you have improved so much?" Goku looked at the others "I've climbed the korin tower and passed Korin's test. Now am training with Kami. I took a break to meat up with bulma and learnt that she was kidnapped and you know the rest".
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