SickBlad
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Each girl is different, if they want to chill in the little garden like now, let them continue. If they want to explore the outside world without Vahn’s influence, couldn’t he like bind their soul to an object like a lich’s phylactery so if they die on their journey vahn could revive them. Tbh I kinda see the little garden as like a hub of worlds, his harem could go off and explore whatever world they want (like he does), either with their real body or through vr or whatever. Then come home whenever they feel like it. The only option I see being impossible is them travelling with him, it’s fine if the worlds for relaxing but if he’s trying to get stronger his harem will only get in the way.
Ok... it’s obviously not real, everything up to Voley stopping and hold her back from ruining to the truck was fine. But she stopped in front of the truck, he stopped behind the truck. How did he pull her aside? That’s impossible. Second a truck rolling backwards onto them killing them? That’s fuking ridiculous, people survive that **** easily, not even considering she’s supposed to be ‘super human’. This novel is on a thin edge to be dropped.
This has happened TWICE now, does the item recalled from a card ‘destroy’ or displace matter that happens to be in its destination? Or is she stabbing with the knife after materialising it? If it’s the second why the fuk isn’t the author writing that?!?! E.g “with a flash of white light, she slams her other hand into the mouth piece” If it’s the first, The knife would appear in the centre of the mouth pole, not stabbing into it. Which means she cannot hold onto the creature by holding the knife with both hands. The authors kinda ruining an interesting ability by not writing very well. Also if it’s the first option, she had no reason to store the knife as she could have just held it normally, thus the author seems to just trying to shoehorn this ability into the fight in any way to make her look strong and capable. While all their accomplished is making the 2 ‘veterans’ look like absolute retards, by not knowing how to fight in anyway or even have common sense. Novels going downhill fast.
The test itself is messed up, having half the participants be guaranteed to be eliminated (unless they’re all extremely talented best seeds) means even if you have all above average talented people, half will still not get to climb. For hoh’s situation he knew his future to climb was done. No matter how hard he tries to improve himself he’ll still lose, his one shot was to ruin the chances of others so he could climb. He’s not evil and irredeemable for what he’s done. So Vahn is giving him another chance for atonement. Unless your mess of a comment wasn’t even talking about this 🤷♂️