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Stockholm syndrom lead female gets bullied by baby ceo with abandonment complex for no reason oh not my gift? - temper tantrum oh i broke our agreement ? - not my fault i dont like you to know my wife, but you already working with her, so i am bot gonna tell you its my wife although you are my brother she can't be approached, but he can be all the time and she doesn't need yo know to not make it worse, but she can't have friends or work without having to have s** with him yo appease him is supposed to bear his children, but hes not even treating her anything else but like a sex toy, just splurging now and then like you do to a mistress. all other women get more thoughfull considerations like they are human but not his wife. If I don't go home to break you heart, i am not Gu Jingze
so the reality show gets a full week of filming... but everyone just stayed for one night and no one did actual filming but arriving and holding a press conference .. also.. the event concludes with Lin Xhe getting out of bed falling into a broken dress and the day is over? uhhh.. I don't get why everyone is so excited about such big plotholes .. are you all as smart as Lin Che, that you wouldn't know when you are taking advantage off?
This is a shameless review for author-chan. After spending a depressing time in not finding any novels actually good enough, but calling themself gold, i am back to see how thing have developed I realised i was too stingy. Theres lot to criticize ... but its trivial. Compared to other novels there are bo major plotholes, character deviations or half assed world building. This is an improofing author. Should write novels forever. :X from a person to harsh on herself
So.. you say he had morals.. the first he did was break down into a murdering, raping maniac. And you assume that people suddenly don't have morals or pride left... when deviating. That in itself makes this story worse, then what's out there. This is to all the people that think " this is reality" this is the opposite. Character Design: Well he studies arts read anime and plays games. But as soon as he got power he threw everything he desired away. story development: fast paced, no rhyme or reason, ploy holes will maybe be filled later world background: abandoned in favour of mass murder and rape Writing quality: you can read it ... its english. two stars in my book.
... well side characters without character, they are all the same besides their clothes. To be fair one is different.. but thats because he doesn't speak. well MC OP beats all 100/100 and if not certainly won't be killed, and will escape when he pleases. Worst part there is literally nothing to the environment. Like they could be living on rocks thats how well explained their environment is.. you dont get any feeling for any city or forest or mountain. they will always quickly reach their destination. There is literally no background story to anything really. a sentence or two maybe on special occasions. ... theres no interaction with the environment besides treasures falling out of it when he cuts a hole.. there nearly never anyone living nearby that could get hurt.. and in the city everyone gets saved. ... this is no game of thrones.. but neither is it anything really. its a bland, high progression novel where the OP Main literally is as naiv as can be normally.. but suddenly becomes buisness smart and calculative just by mentioning that a hes cunning so of course things go his way. overall.. if you need depth in a novel go away
giving such a low review kinda hurts me more then the author. a few plotholes, mostly good writing quality, a far too reckless MC thats way to spontaneous for her otherwise shrewdness.. and the only reason for the poor grade, one chapter a week means almost nothing gets done and i wonder how many years it will take to finish this journey. so its not unlikely author will drop it.. its sad that quality can take time and at the same time kill a story, since how to wait for it? i hope the author will develope a plot for her to follow that will outpace one or two years of chapters. i recommend this for its quality.
commoner die.. oh you are not a commoner?! then the beautiful princess saved the coachmens life, saw a strange person, which may molest her in the future and gave him a sack of gold. u could have written that far better the payment must suck.
not relatable, not realistic in any common sense.. lack of knowledge author cant even comprehend the word "loss" no scientist would see it as a loss when some not instantly finishes his work about a topic many hundred years ahead.. i dont see why i should fill my head with this ill logic, that speak bad about every other country, portraits maliciousness into their personalities/ nationality, and cant stop the novel from being plain superficial.
... how limited is the imagination of the author? this is overly simplified, a crude wording style and overall just plain predictable. wheres the fun?