bald_daoist
A bald daoist looking for cultivation for the hairless men.
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bald_daoist2 years agoCommentedSo luke just said leo’s class secret to cervantes and now this. It’s getting annoying.
- bald_daoist3 years agoPosted
Writing quality seems ok. I did not notice any granmar error for those grammar police. Nature of the story is also interesting for me, I kinda like it. My problem is the pace of the story. It’s really slow for me. Travelling to guild foundation is more or less 100 chapters. Once they arrived, i assume there’s another more or less 100 chapters just for him to become an adventurer. Yes. That’s right. So as of chapter 250 plus, it’s still an adventurer examination. I sure hope that at chapter 300, the exam is already over.
- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
Yeah boi
- bald_daoist4 years agoPosted
Story is good initially. But it goes downhill. The amount of filler is astonishing that I just skimmed through chapters. The filler is on another level!
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- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
A so called genius, master strategist, etc. just let a criminal who raped a 14 yr old go. And that same criminal knows the plan. this seems to be getting ridiculous?
- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
His weakness should be Alice.
- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
He’s in Alucard persoba right? So they know that he’s Zevien?
- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
Aww. It’s on hiatus.
- bald_daoist4 years agoCommented
Who is merlin again?