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Nan200911mthReplied to Snowlotus56- Nan20091yrCommented
(⌐■_■) FBI...hands up
"I am John Jameson. It's nice to meet you. Do you want a candy?" John introduced himself. He wanted to make the kid as comfortable as possible. So he brought out candies. - Nan20092yrCommentedCh 1463 Final Relay, Destination Point (End)
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I am not liking this, this is down right evil.
"I… I love you too, Mom--" - Nan20092yrCommented
I am feeling sick
'That's the reason why I have you as my son, so I can grow my own ideal lover.' Bibi Dong inwardly smiled. - Nan20092yrCommented
what a lame weakness
The moment I tried to enter Violet's house, I was prevented from entering? Soon I remember the weakness of vampires who can't enter other people's houses without being invited… It seems I have that weakness too. - Nan20092yrCommented
It was a scummy move, treating his lover as a object of trade.
"Yeah," I replied to Bryan. "It's very simple. Iris is your fiancée, right? However, she doesn't like you… Literally, she thinks she is too much for you. Thus, let's see if it's true in this duel. If you win, not only I'll let you go, but Iris will agree to marry you. Afterward, no matter what do you want to do, she will agree. - Nan20092yrCommented
Didn't the student protection mechanism get destroyed few chapter ago by a Hera family guy...? Is this a plot hole author???
Fortunately, the protective barrier activated at the last second, protecting her. - Nan20092yrCommentedCh 2 The Appearance Of The Space
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Author-san, her age is 35 right(according to the glossary)..then what's this about "before 30"?
"Mm, well done." I nodded in praise. "Practice hard and you will be able to breakthrough beyond the twelfth layer before thirty. By then, I will probably have enough time." - Nan20092yrReplied to TheManBrownieCh 529 Chapter 525: A date
- Nan20092yrReplied to User177785
This is no where as bad as you guys portrait it to be. MC get its divine soul (Heavin) at ch300 and by ch310 he get matured(due to 2 year time skip) and he is actively help MC with cultivation and creating/learning new technique. The Heavin childish part you mention only happen during the 1st few chapter, later he will have a mature mind.
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WTF... (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻
"No, and to answer your question, you're already my master. You've owned all of the hallows for a while now. You simply have to bring them together for us to make it official." She says as annoyance starts creeping back into her voice. "Which is why I had to bring you here today. You've been avoiding our first meeting, which has been infuriating! Do you know how long I've been waiting for those hallows to come together?" - Nan20093yrCommented
Dude...how hypocrite can MC be. 🙄....He is doing the same thing with wizards
"I think some of what he said was correct. The muggles are advancing quickly and if we aren't careful, we could be in some serious danger." Tom explains, only worrying them further. "Although, I don't believe he went about it in the right way. Peace through enslavement is not a lasting peace." - Nan20093yrCommented
In what way is MC kind person.......... o(￣┰￣*)ゞ....he is a self centered person...who do any thing for his selfish gain.
"No, you are a kind person, but not kind enough to fight a war for no reason." Druella says. - Nan20093yrPosted
Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) . Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway.
- Nan20093yrPosted
I really like your story & its concept. It is a fun read to pass time. The only glaring flaw I could find is the horrible grammar and spelling mistakes. Author can use grammar checking plugin like Grammarly to fix grammar and spelling error. Also, please re-read the stuff your wrote before publishing, clearly your are not doing it. I really want to continue reading this novel in a good flow, without getting interrupted by silly spelling & grammar mistakes. Once, again author-san please `(*>﹏<*)′ fix your grammar before publishing.