I really like your story & its concept. It is a fun read to pass time. The only glaring flaw I could find is the horrible grammar and spelling mistakes. Author can use grammar checking plugin like Grammarly to fix grammar and spelling error. Also, please re-read the stuff your wrote before publishing, clearly your are not doing it. I really want to continue reading this novel in a good flow, without getting interrupted by silly spelling & grammar mistakes. Once, again author-san please `(*>﹏<*)′ fix your grammar before publishing.
InGlorious
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LIKEAuthor, you know, you could use Grammarly keyboard in android or use google docs to grammar & spell correction. Please at least don't make spelling mistakes like "af" instead of "of", it is really a let down when reading in a good flow.
InGlorious:I already said that English isn't my first language, so even if I re read it there won't be any fix. My laptop is already busted, so I can't use any grammar apps, every app for Android is shit, I don't know if there is something for ios or not. I only own a cheap Android phone
Nan2009:This is my review after reading till chapter 339: The story has really become interesting after Harry Potter arc and the author really improved his grammar (I am so proud of you, ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ ).