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TheGreatDevourer1yrReplied to Mr_N00B- TheGreatDevourer1yrReplied to Kacerolo
he didn't get it from the list though
—[Battle Clothes List], 1st place, Libra Saint Cloth; holder, Rifan. - TheGreatDevourer1yrCommented
Why would you help people make money in the exact same way as you do? There's always a case of supply and demand and if you help people that increase the supply, it'll eventually exceed the demand. you won't be able to sell everything and you'll make less money. It's just dumb
Ch 32 Chapter 32: Signing - TheGreatDevourer1yrCommented
Feng shui elements huh
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Overall decent grammar and spelling. But the story is just bad. It starts fairly interesting, but it just devolves into a lot of stupid name calling and cursing, cause the MC is edgy or something. The MC turns into complete trash around chapter 16 and tries to tell himself it's okay to blackmail someone due to what they did to him. It's just like "yes what I'm doing is bad, but she's done worse to me so it's okay" which it really isn't. And there's just a bunch of dumb decisions riddled throughout the story. All in all a story with decent potential that went downhill due to an edgy incompetent writer that didn't plan out the story well.
- TheGreatDevourer3yrCommentedWith on swift motion, he unbuckled and unzipped his pant releasing his beast within. His size could be compared to some male porn stars, its pulsing and extremely hard appearance reveals the male student's every intention of plunging deep into the female student's secret place all the way until the hilt.