Review Detail of TheGreatDevourer in The Cursed Gamer

Overall decent grammar and spelling. But the story is just bad. It starts fairly interesting, but it just devolves into a lot of stupid name calling and cursing, cause the MC is edgy or something. The MC turns into complete trash around chapter 16 and tries to tell himself it's okay to blackmail someone due to what they did to him. It's just like "yes what I'm doing is bad, but she's done worse to me so it's okay" which it really isn't. And there's just a bunch of dumb decisions riddled throughout the story. All in all a story with decent potential that went downhill due to an edgy incompetent writer that didn't plan out the story well.