I just don't understand why. If you wanted a dragon just start as a dragon why take it. It just takes away from the power he is developing. It takes what would have made a good read and made it just another dude who would do anything for power

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I don't know what people are thinking expecting a great read from a fanfic. Fanfiction is for the author to tell a version of an original story it doesn't matter if it is perfect. To me and all the others who like your story all that matters is you write it and keep a some what schedule. As you write you will improve have new ideas for better books maybe an original. So about all the others who only give one star just because of not enough sex or poor grammar or other reasons all I have to say is they suck.

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A solid fanfic the story is well written and the plot is very good the lemons could be better that does need some work to me it's not a normal gamer fic that's centered around the protagonist but more around the coven

Concept is good grammar and story telling needs work but it should get better with time and experience

Harry Potter highschool dxd and many more. All I see is the big three Naruto, MHA, One piece. The world ideas are great 👍 but the storyline is meh 😕 all the MC does is have sex then fight then more sex. It needs more in between chapters. I like the date chapters but all it does is prep the MC for more girls. The sex scene's are well written not the best but decently good. I had more hopes about the chat room and missions leading to a better story line plot he could definitely invite more members or just have the system auto invite like the first members.

Great read i definitely recommend I feel bad for the author though he has to stop and explain his thoughts for all the extremists out there complaining that it's not cannon. Who the blank wants to read cannon in the first place. It's a FANFIC

Good

Ehhh hmmm the MC is slow in tbe head and not serious at all a dimwit

Could be good but its all over the place no real consistency

Boring

It good translation could be better .......................and more of a back story.................how he goes back and changes things he already fixed feels more like the auther just had a better idea on how things should go and rewritin it