I don't know what people are thinking expecting a great read from a fanfic. Fanfiction is for the author to tell a version of an original story it doesn't matter if it is perfect. To me and all the others who like your story all that matters is you write it and keep a some what schedule. As you write you will improve have new ideas for better books maybe an original. So about all the others who only give one star just because of not enough sex or poor grammar or other reasons all I have to say is they suck.
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