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Review Detail of Dagonoid in Multiverse Internet Cafe: The Game Maker

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Dagonoid
DagonoidLv21yrDagonoid

I really like this style of fanfic where characters from different worlds interact with each other. I hope this work continues[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Multiverse Internet Cafe: The Game Maker

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Richard_Williams
Richard_WilliamsLv3Richard_Williams

Concept is good grammar and story telling needs work but it should get better with time and experience