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Sach_Official

Sach_Official

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just a novel hobbyists + writer

2018-02-25 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official10mth
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    hi author advisory you may be unable to vote are you? apologizes for that. I have been stumbled into uni and work stuff 馃槶. I will be back in end of this month, while fixing the stuff. sorry for the away in 2 months behind .

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official10mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Appreciate your effort to read till that far, man of steel. However, there is a reason why I haven't getting editor yet. Because, its all about funds that I couldn't afford yet. But again, thank you for the feedback.

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
    Replied to raeoflight1985

    apologizes for the turn off. I'm still trying my best to write that in a flow. Of course, this is the first time I become a writer. So apologizes for those dumb blunders. I will opt in rewriting once I have enough funding on it. I mean, I could do all of those, but it will burn myself out too much If I had to do both rewriting and releasing. again, thank you for the visit. It's really a honor to know that there is a feedback to know at last :D

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
    Replied to Altaris01
    Ch -8 Rune Codes (Mandatory to read)
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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
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    hmm, as a fellow readers (yes, I'm a huge bingie reader too despite being an author!) I would say some things here. Not as an author, but as a reader myself who love to craving for some brain food in the midnight! - Try not to overusing words "The" and "," punctuation. It was pretty messy when you are using those two too much. - Avoid dumping information in bracket, it was a huge turn off for many readers. Good thing that I'm a readers who used with MTL, so this is not a big deal for me, but may be a huge deal for many readers. Example: ...... where human and monos (....)-> you can discard this info in the bracket. Maybe you can replace it with .....where the human and the unique being with some superb abilities named monos who ..... or second option, you can just continue without those explanation and save the info later in aux chapters (most of my fav book has this one!) grammar side, I won't comment much since I have no rights to comment this as I'm not a good grammar checker as well. Hope it could help and cheers buddy, welcome to the writing club of WN!

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
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    Author Advisory Currently the co-author is having a serious illness. So, this book will be paused for a time being until the further notice. To be honest, this works can't be done perfectly without her help. So, please wait until she's recovered. Time takes may be taken in a pretty long time as the illness was pretty serious, may be 1-2 months ahead. Apologize in advance

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
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    Recent Update: I have been recovered after the nasty attack from GERD, just in case you didn't know, GERD is the gastric related illness that could choke you to death. And yes, I managed to survive with it. So, I will be back again by tomorrow. Thank you for the understanding <3

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
    Replied to _BoredToDeath_

    erm..... *run away

    "This sword was meant to kill him. A vampire is weak against the silver. So..."
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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    and second, there is a secret behind of it, you got to read more to know

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official11mth
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    well buddy, the truth is. I don't even have enough resources to have a consultant or an editor. It costs like 200-300$/month, while I'm starting here without any resources. So yeah, sorry for the confusion, I will talk to the recruited editor once I could afford one.

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to XantosZ

    thanks for the correction! sorry for not replying recently.

    Those voices were running Chris's mind amok as he walked towards the massive door with a small hole that fits the average human's finger.
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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to marie1992

    ask the author right away, she has the discord

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Dao_of_infinity

    MC, Elanor (latest Chapters), Kingstone (latest Chapter), and the four guys he mentioned in early chapter

    Hybrid: The rarest one, called as the Prodigy as well. Excels in both physical and magic. Tend to become the guild master for a Magus guild as they were the strongest one compared to the pure magic or physical.
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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Sach_Official

    *Chris Jansen as the special case since his Aura Element could render him to master any kind of elemental magics

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to GifflarGod

    Aura itself is much more OP than time

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Sach_Official

    *Asta's Aura Element

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Sach_Official

    *Aura Element

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Sach_Official

    Elanor's Aura Magic: Soverign, We will know it soon. hehe

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  • Sach_Official
    Sach_Official1yr
    Replied to Sach_Official

    Chris's Aura Element: Urano Urano = A magic prowess that led the owner capable to master any kind of magic without any regard of element. However, he can't master any offensive attacks thanks to how stressful it was to his nerve system on his brain. Asta's Aura: Law of the Life and Death If you had read the latest chapter, probably you got the idea about Law of the Life and Death, yes? Yup. In the near future, Chris will be able to use it again. However, Asta could use it much easier than anyone, considering of he is the descendant of the god of the life and death and the king of the Vahalla

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