See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

-2 because there is a typo apparently in chapter.overall in the story, it shows up something different. I think the MC Name? because it sounds foreign for me. but he is both smart and dumb at the same time 😂😂.it's like gotoubun but in fantasy settings here.#TeamEvelyn by the way.

hi author advisory you may be unable to vote are you? apologizes for that. I have been stumbled into uni and work stuff 😭. I will be back in end of this month, while fixing the stuff. sorry for the away in 2 months behind .

Appreciate your effort to read till that far, man of steel. However, there is a reason why I haven't getting editor yet. Because, its all about funds that I couldn't afford yet. But again, thank you for the feedback.

apologizes for the turn off. I'm still trying my best to write that in a flow. Of course, this is the first time I become a writer. So apologizes for those dumb blunders. I will opt in rewriting once I have enough funding on it. I mean, I could do all of those, but it will burn myself out too much If I had to do both rewriting and releasing. again, thank you for the visit. It's really a honor to know that there is a feedback to know at last :D

hmm, as a fellow readers (yes, I'm a huge bingie reader too despite being an author!) I would say some things here. Not as an author, but as a reader myself who love to craving for some brain food in the midnight! - Try not to overusing words "The" and "," punctuation. It was pretty messy when you are using those two too much. - Avoid dumping information in bracket, it was a huge turn off for many readers. Good thing that I'm a readers who used with MTL, so this is not a big deal for me, but may be a huge deal for many readers. Example: ...... where human and monos (....)-> you can discard this info in the bracket. Maybe you can replace it with .....where the human and the unique being with some superb abilities named monos who ..... or second option, you can just continue without those explanation and save the info later in aux chapters (most of my fav book has this one!) grammar side, I won't comment much since I have no rights to comment this as I'm not a good grammar checker as well. Hope it could help and cheers buddy, welcome to the writing club of WN!

Author Advisory Currently the co-author is having a serious illness. So, this book will be paused for a time being until the further notice. To be honest, this works can't be done perfectly without her help. So, please wait until she's recovered. Time takes may be taken in a pretty long time as the illness was pretty serious, may be 1-2 months ahead. Apologize in advance

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

Recent Update: I have been recovered after the nasty attack from GERD, just in case you didn't know, GERD is the gastric related illness that could choke you to death. And yes, I managed to survive with it. So, I will be back again by tomorrow. Thank you for the understanding <3

erm..... *run away

and second, there is a secret behind of it, you got to read more to know

well buddy, the truth is. I don't even have enough resources to have a consultant or an editor. It costs like 200-300$/month, while I'm starting here without any resources. So yeah, sorry for the confusion, I will talk to the recruited editor once I could afford one.

thanks for the correction! sorry for not replying recently.

ask the author right away, she has the discord