Althen

Characters do not behave with a bit of logical sense behind the decisions. Out of character. He gets too strong too fast. …………………………………………………..

It’s a copy of “The Spider” fanfic, word by word. Lying about it being the next book. Don’t pass this as original like you indicated……………………

Bad grammar, characters actions and more specifically how they act or behave is nonsense or out of character, story development is decent at most, …

Awful cringe chapter

I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)

The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.

You mention he didn’t want to kill the king because he forgets it’s a game all the time… so this time he want to kill all and changes his view in les than 24h? 2 chapters???

If the spirit of the kingdom appeared when praying to save an elf in the kingdom, the king, why aren’t the concubines given the same option?

How many times are her looks going to be mentioned? Yes, green eyes, blond hair, looks like a fairy…is it for word count?

Because even though you have written him as always being careful, he is risking it by getting cursed on purpose. He could instead get his memories back, less risky and since it was information maybe related to the development of the world he is at, definitely indispensable.