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dan7cor

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I get scolded by others because I retract myself from reality while I inmerse in the bountiful richness of novels, also, I sneak read at work, don't be like me.

2017-12-04 JoinedChile
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1mth
    Posted

    This is the best lord territory novel that I have read at the moment the pace is perfect, there are obstacles to overcome, the MC has the right amount of power to keep you invested in his growth, he uses his power in smart ways which most authors don't use, he is not the type of OP MC where he is good at everything without even trying his strength makes sense, the characters are interesting and you enjoy the interactions between them with MC and each other. With so many boring novels on this platform, this is a rare gem

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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor6mth
    Commented

    this is a good quote

    Because darkness hides everything the night sees all.
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    Blessed by Night
    Fantasy · AnathaShesha
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor7mth
    Commented

    400 years is too little time for all of this galactic empires to have appeared

    The Light Elves of the Alfheim Dominion were one of four major galactic powers, and the territory that fell into their sphere of influence was roughly one fourth of the milky way galaxy. Included in this vast swath of space was the Germanic Star-Empire, who were a direct vassal of the Alfheim Dominion.
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    Interstellar Age
    Sci-fi · Zentmeister
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor7mth
    Commented

    so this is the utopia my racist neighbor always wanted?

    However, unlike his peers, who all had blonde hair and blue eyes, he was a mutant with silver hair and eyes. A mutation that just barely allowed him to exist, for if a far more taboo mutation had occurred, he would have been terminated upon birth.
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    Interstellar Age
    Sci-fi · Zentmeister
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor9mth
    Commented

    yeah, this is gonna be a fast paced novel, so here is where I drop it

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Fight In The Courtyard!
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    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor9mth
    Commented

    this is really cringe, everything else was great, but this annoyed me

    "WHERE IS HE?? BRING HIM OUT TO MEET YOUR GREATEST GRANDFATHER MEPHISTO AND I'll STOP KILLING YOUR DESCENDANTS AFTER THE 200th GENERATION."
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    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor10mth
    Commented

    so, she did oral right after losing her Virginity? yeah this shows author has never taken anyone's virginity

    Ch 16 A Night With Diya Part 2[+18]
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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor10mth
    Posted

    dear author, you mentioned the book was starting to lose support, I have some ideas why this might be happening in my opinion as a reader. You are focusing on the wrong things, you have been writing entire chapters dedicated to fights or pill creation and theory, which is good in small doses. But there are no meaningful interactions, the last I remembered was the rat nest and a lot of chapters passed with nothing feeling important. I am inclined to drop the novel because I don't feel emotions while reading it. Hope this helps you find the writing direction for the novel to grow, if you think is needed.

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    Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
    Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor11mth
    Commented

    gotta love the memes

    Please, I prefer to call it a calculated risk and last I checked, my math was still pretty good.
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    What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?
    Fantasy · Draekai
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Replied to Embres

    is also such a generic issue and they don't realize that kills the interesting part of a plot, which is actually making an effort

    Xia Qiu was one of Dragon Kingdom's top singers. She had a sweet voice, a pure appearance, and was clean. She was one of the most popular stars in Dragon Kingdom.
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    Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment
    Urban · Supreme Yi Fan
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Commented

    it would have been interesting to see how he handled the 8 millions to discreetly make them legal, but nooooo, the author had to give a stupid reward that resolved a whole plot point, so many novels get dropped because there is no difficulty

    [Congratulations, Host. For completing the treasure-hunting navigation, you are rewarded with a Zhongtian Lake-View Villa.]
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    Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment
    Urban · Supreme Yi Fan
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Posted

    Another story with bad pacing, the MC gets incredible powerfull abilities left and right, for no other reason than a simple lvl up. Is boring to watch an MC that does not have to struggle to obtain what he needs to survive, it makes any reward he gets unfulfilling and boring to read. All the main girls are into him right from the start so no romantic development either. Also the MC has HIV at the beginning but then is never mentioned again and he sleeps with multiple girls without ever addressing it.

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    God of Time System: Harem in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Posted

    the big issue with this story and the reason I stopped reading was pacing, so many authors here don't understand pacing. In this novel, the MC conquered 3 different girls on the first day, forcing feelings into them, this was so unrealistic that it became annoying. The MC has no difficulty at anything so the whole story becomes boring, the pacing is horrible and the characters become stupid for no good reason (there is a reason, just that is a reason that brings down the quality of the story). The concept was interesting but was completely killed by the plot

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    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Commented

    cheers!!

    Ch 58 Goblins
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    Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
    Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Commented

    good job author, liked that he is struggling to learn alchemy as it should not be easy

    Ch 53 First Attempt
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    Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
    Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Commented

    I am surprised nobody recognized RimWorld, the best micro colony management game

    Leo did not even need to browse through the list, he directly searched Brimworld and started the game. While he turned the game on in one screen, he opened some tutorial videos on another screen next to her.
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor1yr
    Replied to Exlor

    author, will we ever get a hard-cover version of the book? I want a physical version to add to my collection

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor2yr
    Replied to Exlor

    I wish to buy volumes of this book in physical copies, is this possible? will it be possible in the future?

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • dan7cor
    dan7cor2yr
    Commented

    is there a way to buy this novel in physical copy?

    Ch 3297 Streaming Celebrities
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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