dan7cor
I get scolded by others because I retract myself from reality while I inmerse in the bountiful richness of novels, also, I sneak read at work, don't be like me.
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This is the best lord territory novel that I have read at the moment the pace is perfect, there are obstacles to overcome, the MC has the right amount of power to keep you invested in his growth, he uses his power in smart ways which most authors don't use, he is not the type of OP MC where he is good at everything without even trying his strength makes sense, the characters are interesting and you enjoy the interactions between them with MC and each other. With so many boring novels on this platform, this is a rare gem
this is a good quote
400 years is too little time for all of this galactic empires to have appeared
so this is the utopia my racist neighbor always wanted?
this is really cringe, everything else was great, but this annoyed me
dear author, you mentioned the book was starting to lose support, I have some ideas why this might be happening in my opinion as a reader. You are focusing on the wrong things, you have been writing entire chapters dedicated to fights or pill creation and theory, which is good in small doses. But there are no meaningful interactions, the last I remembered was the rat nest and a lot of chapters passed with nothing feeling important. I am inclined to drop the novel because I don't feel emotions while reading it. Hope this helps you find the writing direction for the novel to grow, if you think is needed.
gotta love the memes
is also such a generic issue and they don't realize that kills the interesting part of a plot, which is actually making an effort
it would have been interesting to see how he handled the 8 millions to discreetly make them legal, but nooooo, the author had to give a stupid reward that resolved a whole plot point, so many novels get dropped because there is no difficulty
Another story with bad pacing, the MC gets incredible powerfull abilities left and right, for no other reason than a simple lvl up. Is boring to watch an MC that does not have to struggle to obtain what he needs to survive, it makes any reward he gets unfulfilling and boring to read. All the main girls are into him right from the start so no romantic development either. Also the MC has HIV at the beginning but then is never mentioned again and he sleeps with multiple girls without ever addressing it.
the big issue with this story and the reason I stopped reading was pacing, so many authors here don't understand pacing. In this novel, the MC conquered 3 different girls on the first day, forcing feelings into them, this was so unrealistic that it became annoying. The MC has no difficulty at anything so the whole story becomes boring, the pacing is horrible and the characters become stupid for no good reason (there is a reason, just that is a reason that brings down the quality of the story). The concept was interesting but was completely killed by the plot
I am surprised nobody recognized RimWorld, the best micro colony management game