Review Detail of dan7cor in Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

dear author, you mentioned the book was starting to lose support, I have some ideas why this might be happening in my opinion as a reader. You are focusing on the wrong things, you have been writing entire chapters dedicated to fights or pill creation and theory, which is good in small doses. But there are no meaningful interactions, the last I remembered was the rat nest and a lot of chapters passed with nothing feeling important. I am inclined to drop the novel because I don't feel emotions while reading it. Hope this helps you find the writing direction for the novel to grow, if you think is needed.