Kazeid

I like this arc. It remind me of the time I was reading Warlock of the Magus world during it's translation.

I was thinking the same thing

+1

+1

MCxGoddess

In the chapter you have written sperm, i think you mean spear.

There is also Scribblehub, Alternate History, Questionable Questing, Sufficient Velocity and SpaceBattle but i didn't find it on those (i'm not really good at searching with the different search engine on the other site).

I think instead of a rewrite you should replace the first 30 chapters with a summary of it.

You can make him challenge Gan Fall to a honor duel with the loser becoming the subordinate of the winner or becoming the new God.

Noice