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lazy0061yrCommentedI should have said this in the previews chapter but only now I'll say it... Lu Qinran should be able to impregnant her lover the first time they make love bcuz they did it without protection... they were like a mindless beast in heat...
The two do them came at the same time, Atria released the heat inside her filling her up. Lyra had her eyes rolled back and her body convulsed from the cum.- lazy0061yrCommented
huh? she walks not swim? I thought she is a mermaid...
A map opened and a red dot appeared on the map, his location was near to where she is. Atria moved her legs with power, her speed was fast and she was able to get to his location fats. - lazy0061yrCommented
typhoon not hurricane... the former happens in the sea/ocean while the later happens in the land...
Atria was an orphan, her parents died when the hurricane hit their home, leaving her alone. She had always been a good girl and also sweet. When she meets Shin she felt the warmth that her parents have. - lazy0061yrCommented
pls clarify f Lea is teenager or young adult... or that years have passed already... after all Lea met Luna when she was 2 or 4 yrs old... and this war happens after I think a few months hahave passed? But now this princess saw Lea and thought she was gorgeous not a cute kid or why even there is a kid in front of her in this war...
The man laughed like a crazy person when suddenly a girl landed near us. She had silver and aqua eyes. She looks really beautiful, Rea was stunned and thought one thing 'Gorgeous '. - lazy0061yrCommented
really how many years have passed already? I thought Lea is only a 2 or 4 yrs old child...
"Mom, I'll go in a different direction we'll meet up later" Lea looked at her mom - lazy0061yrCommented
is this how 4 yrs old child shoult think or act? this child matured mentally 100x than normal... it felt like she is the same age to Thea while Luna is the teenage kid there...
Ever since she played with her she can always see her staring at her mom. She decided to observe her for a while and sure enough, when she look at mom her eyes are in love, and also saw her jealous look. - lazy0061yrCommented
she is young adult woman but she wants tot alk her worries to a 4 yrs old child...
"Lea can I talk to you," Luna said nervously - lazy0061yrCommented
she is young adult woman but she talk her worries to a 4 yrs old child...
"Lea can I talk to you," Luna said nervously - lazy0061yrCommented
does this mean Lea is much more older than Luna? this is confusing after it was said that cain and luna were young beast... can any1 elaborate it properly? it also said in the previews chapter that Luna is newly born beast people... which is it really? from that only I can tell that Lea, Thea's, daughter is older than Luna... does this mean Thea and Cain were 20 or 30 years older than Luna?
After they transformed into a human body they can start training their powers through mock battles and hunting. - lazy0061yrCommented
then how did she communicate to Cain earlier?
Luna used her paw and write her name on the ground, they won't be able to understand each other since they are not the same species. - lazy0061yrPosted
The story was good and interesting author but it would be good if you could determine what point of view you want to use because it made me confused whose point of view you are using as I moved on the proceeding chapters, the most basic is use third person perspective or point of view, that way even f there are wrong spelling or grammar readers can easily understand the story... 😅 sorry if I talked too much but the story is good and interesting inspite of the confusing pov.. 😁
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they just finished taking about working hard and no shortcuts but this happens? Poof!!! the MC got permit... 😐😑
"It's done, you got a permit," Yun replied with the fullest confidence. - lazy0061yrCommented
exp 1x not 2x? It's better to have nothing at all after all nothing changed.... even f she got 100 exp that will not change or will not turn into 200 exp...
Friend of Eri: [Rank E] (Passive) Increases all XP gain by x1 and attribute point and attribute gain by x1. - lazy0061yrCommented
20? Yet the FL wants to spend time with the MC and blushes all the way as her heart beats faster so I thought her favorability is about 50 or 60 points... for 20 points is to low for the FL to have this kind of reaction...
Favorability: 20 - lazy0061yrCommented
🤣🤣🤣🤣 u better not say that 2 her Keiko or else...
'I'm not drooling over your breasts; I just recalled the taste of beef burgers.' - lazy0061yrCommented
🤣🤣🤣 what would Jeanne do f she learns what Keiko's thinking?
Who knew that this small gesture was immediately noticed by Jeanne and earned a flick at her forehead? - lazy0061yrCommented
😞 yeah... she unconsciously felt inferior to Keiko...
She had looked down on her and viewed her with contempt before and was slightly antagonistic toward her, but it turned out that she was the one who helped her in the end. And the fact that Keiko's strength was at a similar level or even higher than hers hit her confidence quite a bit. - lazy0061yrCommented
she really did change her title for Keiko...
"Sister Keiko, you are... really amazing! It's like... like... I don't even know how to describe you."