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I should have said this in the previews chapter but only now I'll say it... Lu Qinran should be able to impregnant her lover the first time they make love bcuz they did it without protection... they were like a mindless beast in heat...
huh? she walks not swim? I thought she is a mermaid...
typhoon not hurricane... the former happens in the sea/ocean while the later happens in the land...
pls clarify f Lea is teenager or young adult... or that years have passed already... after all Lea met Luna when she was 2 or 4 yrs old... and this war happens after I think a few months hahave passed? But now this princess saw Lea and thought she was gorgeous not a cute kid or why even there is a kid in front of her in this war...
really how many years have passed already? I thought Lea is only a 2 or 4 yrs old child...
is this how 4 yrs old child shoult think or act? this child matured mentally 100x than normal... it felt like she is the same age to Thea while Luna is the teenage kid there...
she is young adult woman but she wants tot alk her worries to a 4 yrs old child...
she is young adult woman but she talk her worries to a 4 yrs old child...
does this mean Lea is much more older than Luna? this is confusing after it was said that cain and luna were young beast... can any1 elaborate it properly? it also said in the previews chapter that Luna is newly born beast people... which is it really? from that only I can tell that Lea, Thea's, daughter is older than Luna... does this mean Thea and Cain were 20 or 30 years older than Luna?
then how did she communicate to Cain earlier?
The story was good and interesting author but it would be good if you could determine what point of view you want to use because it made me confused whose point of view you are using as I moved on the proceeding chapters, the most basic is use third person perspective or point of view, that way even f there are wrong spelling or grammar readers can easily understand the story... 😅 sorry if I talked too much but the story is good and interesting inspite of the confusing pov.. 😁
they just finished taking about working hard and no shortcuts but this happens? Poof!!! the MC got permit... 😐😑
exp 1x not 2x? It's better to have nothing at all after all nothing changed.... even f she got 100 exp that will not change or will not turn into 200 exp...
20? Yet the FL wants to spend time with the MC and blushes all the way as her heart beats faster so I thought her favorability is about 50 or 60 points... for 20 points is to low for the FL to have this kind of reaction...
🤣🤣🤣🤣 u better not say that 2 her Keiko or else...
🤣🤣🤣 what would Jeanne do f she learns what Keiko's thinking?
😞 yeah... she unconsciously felt inferior to Keiko...
she really did change her title for Keiko...